Player of Hearts - Comments

Ouch. NOOO! He really is dead! [sniff]
It was an amazing story though..

Awh,it makes me want to cry
: (

loved the epilogue!
its a shame that Victor died!

OMFG!!
I CAN'T BELIEVE VICTOR'S DEAD!!
*CRIES*
SO SAD!!

i was randomly wondering who that doode with that tats is.....&& if this was a random original or what..... lol but i still loved it! 2 thumbsup

Did that just happen? Or am I dreaming? is she dreaming? Is this the end?!?! OH MY god! i'm having a minor freak out here...
That was not the happy Disney ending we all know and love O_O
Sunny-Lee <3

O my gee. I can't belive Victor died. That is sooo sad. Poor Ava.
xoxoxo
Escape

:O
WHAT? Dude ?
Omg,the fucker killed him
Oh man,now i'm really sad
: (

noooo Viktor died! *cries*
i cant believe that bret killed him!

did Avalee get the baby in the end?
if she did what did she get?

i cant believe that this story's finished.
im gonna miss reading this!

amazing as always!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I screamed, I swear I did. Oh my God. Not Victor! NOOOOOOOOO!
Amazing story, but oh man. I'm sad now.

Sob filled ending, but I loved it all the same.

I cried.
He's gone.
I really dislike Bret.
How could he?

Anyways lovely job my dears.

i cried.
:(

Oh my,I love this story
: )

nooo!!!
you can't end it!!

*PAGE CLAIM!*
Haha Awhhh. YAY! *squeal*
lol! i just had a random moment there... sorry.
I think that they should see brett at the 'ice cream joint'
There's only a few chapters left? That's depressing. :(
Sunny-Lee<3

Uhoh, she preggars. Wonder if Brett or Bratt or whatever his name is will kill Victor, dun dun dun.

love it. cant wait for more =]

i love it!

LMAO. bret vs victor...I'd pay to see that.