Player of Hearts - Comments

Okay, that was like major disturbing to me... lol! I was in Ava's head and then... that's just creepy. I don't even understand how Tessa could have consented to that while her best friend was in the car.... I'm... creeped out.
lol! but it was good. lol Yet creepy... good. Creepy good?
Sunny-Lee <3

If Tessa wasn't my alter-ego, I'd kill herXD

LOL, LOVE IT

lol! that was major amusing. I really liked it.
The whole thing, except for the ending... what was she gonna say?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
*is bothered by this, and it wasn't even a cliffhanger technically*
Sunny-lee <3

Jacob...oh man. [shakes head] The kid is a riot. Between him and Tessa, I think I'm going to go insane.

Lmfao,it burns xD
Awesome chapter
: D

AWESOME!!!
LOL

Avalee Marie Todd. :)
I liked this chapter. it was cute, and I liked when she informed Tessa that she was going back with them. i also liked the whole scene where she found them naked int he mustang (Them=Tessa & Jacob) and then the whole scene after with her telling Victor and him thinking it was funny. I also liked when he was like "Stop hitting me! I'm laughing, not choking!"
Sunny-Lee <3

Avalee Marie Todd.
:D
<3

LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!

Really amazing.

<3

loved it!!
:)
cant wait for more!!

LMAO. Too funny. Awww Avalee Todd. Tessa and Jacob are too hilarious. Truly.

loved it.
♥

Yay they are going to get married.
Im so happy.
Cant wait for the wedding.
I hope their friends dont ruin it!

Awwh,
I can hear wedding bells
^.^

Tessa better drive faster, that's all I'm saying. I love this, I'm happy for them, but ahhh! They're going to catch hell. lol.
I claim this page in honor of Victor and his bad boy hotness. =)

LOVED IT!!!

amazing! :D
i love this story!!

WOWIES!!
WASN'T EXPECTING THAT!!

McLovin:

lovedInside:

Okay, so wait a minute.
How come i never realized that this was a shared story before I looked up and saw that it said Chapter by McLovin'?
Well, now that i know, i can give credit to McLovin' as well as you.
*sigh*
That was a good chapter, even though you randomly posted it twice, but then took it off...
Ummmmsssss.....
I liked this. It was likable. *nods* I don't have a favourite line. I'm kinda lost. I think i'll just stop typing now.
Sunny-Lee <3

Haha, I'm that little girl in the background that provides alot of comedic relief!

Me too! When i have shared stories, i just randomly put funny parts in... it's just who i am.
Nice chapter this time, it was sad in the whole Victor D.T-ing fromt eh drugs, but cute that he'd give it up for her.
I think (this is just a suggestion0 that as like a twist, he should take the drugs again.
Also, are they married yet? Or are they just in Vegas?
Sunny-Lee <3