April 5th, 2008 at 12:08am
Player of Hearts - Comments
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If Tessa wasn't my alter-ego, I'd kill herXDApril 4th, 2008 at 11:35pm
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LOL, LOVE ITApril 4th, 2008 at 04:04am
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lol! that was major amusing. I really liked it.
The whole thing, except for the ending... what was she gonna say?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
*is bothered by this, and it wasn't even a cliffhanger technically*
Sunny-lee <3April 4th, 2008 at 01:13am -
Jacob...oh man. [shakes head] The kid is a riot. Between him and Tessa, I think I'm going to go insane.April 3rd, 2008 at 11:22pm
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Lmfao,it burns xD
Awesome chapter
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AWESOME!!!
LOLApril 3rd, 2008 at 08:40am -
Avalee Marie Todd. :)
I liked this chapter. it was cute, and I liked when she informed Tessa that she was going back with them. i also liked the whole scene where she found them naked int he mustang (Them=Tessa & Jacob) and then the whole scene after with her telling Victor and him thinking it was funny. I also liked when he was like "Stop hitting me! I'm laughing, not choking!"
Sunny-Lee <3April 3rd, 2008 at 03:36am -
Avalee Marie Todd.
:D
<3April 2nd, 2008 at 10:55pm -
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!
Really amazing.
<3April 2nd, 2008 at 10:37pm -
loved it!!
:)
cant wait for more!!April 2nd, 2008 at 10:08pm -
LMAO. Too funny. Awww Avalee Todd. Tessa and Jacob are too hilarious. Truly.April 2nd, 2008 at 09:50pm
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loved it.
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Yay they are going to get married.
Im so happy.
Cant wait for the wedding.
I hope their friends dont ruin it!April 1st, 2008 at 11:23pm -
Awwh,
I can hear wedding bells
^.^April 1st, 2008 at 10:05pm -
Tessa better drive faster, that's all I'm saying. I love this, I'm happy for them, but ahhh! They're going to catch hell. lol.
I claim this page in honor of Victor and his bad boy hotness. =)April 1st, 2008 at 09:53pm -
LOVED IT!!!April 1st, 2008 at 08:32pm
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amazing! :D
i love this story!!April 1st, 2008 at 07:47pm -
WOWIES!!
WASN'T EXPECTING THAT!!April 1st, 2008 at 07:59am -
Me too! When i have shared stories, i just randomly put funny parts in... it's just who i am.- McLovin:
Haha, I'm that little girl in the background that provides alot of comedic relief!- lovedInside:
- Okay, so wait a minute.
How come i never realized that this was a shared story before I looked up and saw that it said Chapter by McLovin'?
Well, now that i know, i can give credit to McLovin' as well as you.
*sigh*
That was a good chapter, even though you randomly posted it twice, but then took it off...
Ummmmsssss.....
I liked this. It was likable. *nods* I don't have a favourite line. I'm kinda lost. I think i'll just stop typing now.
Sunny-Lee <3
Nice chapter this time, it was sad in the whole Victor D.T-ing fromt eh drugs, but cute that he'd give it up for her.
I think (this is just a suggestion0 that as like a twist, he should take the drugs again.
Also, are they married yet? Or are they just in Vegas?
Sunny-Lee <3April 1st, 2008 at 02:59am
lol! but it was good. lol Yet creepy... good. Creepy good?
Sunny-Lee <3