You Started It - Comments

I read your Sid story and didn't realize this was yours too. Another favorite. You're amazing. <3

So excited that your next story is gonna be Vik! Looove him, its good to see him get some attention;)

Oh my God! I loved this, but I love the fact you wrote two different endings! I've wanted to do that before, but I didn't think people would like it, but this is so good!

Team Toews! :) I'm so glad she picked him, this story was such a pleasure to read. You are really an amazing writer, and I want to thank you for taking the time and writing this. I loved it so much, and I'm sure your Stalberg story will be just as great. :)

I read the endings last night but wanted to re read this morning before I commented. I loved the Jon ending. I was Team Toews rom the very begining - although I always am!! The best thing was that they fell or each other - warts and all!! They both were not perfect but they found their way to each other.

I liked Viktor, but I did feel he was a little too perfect - do guys like this really exist??? I kept waiting for the woman to come out of his closet or something equally devistating.

But the thing I loved about this ending was that you gave a real insight into your writing process, how "public opinion" can sometimes sway your path. I found that incredibly intriguing. Thank you for that.

I look forward to your future stories - you are an amazing writer.

Great story!!

Love both endings u did an amazing job with story I was so hard to choose who 2 root 4 b/c u made me love John even tho he was an ass hat in this story. So great writing!!! Can't wait 4 the next story!!

I was Team Jon all along so this ending pleases me. :-) I really love how they actually made love this time instead of fucking each other. Jon was so sweet at the end. I'm going to read your alternate ending now. I'm glad you're going to write a story about Viktor next.

Love the ending and looking forward to the Stalberg story :)

Loved the ending! And I'm looking forward to your Viktor story! <3

great ending! i'm so glad your next story will be a stalberg one. i also loved that you included abby. she and vero always seem to be the real life ladies who are written the best/nicest. can't wait to read your next story! :)

even though Jonathan won in this one, i can't complain about the ending ;)
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And i can not wait for the All Vik story!

I love this story so much! Great job!!!!!!

So I finally caught up with this!
Even though Viktor is pretty amazing, I'm Team Jon!
Looking forward to more! <3

Love this! Can't wait for more.

I love that Jon went after her but didn't pressure her. I hope new years is epic for them! I have a feeling she'll either let him in or hurt him. I'm still not convinced you're convinced Fi should be with Jon. (But I'm convinced she should be!)

That was really sweet, but still team Viktor

Awe that was sweet <3 I think they'll be able to work it out...just a hunch.

I am glad that she didnt give into him so easily, I still like Viktor, but the heart wants what the heart wants :) Love the update!

great chapter! Can't wait for more!!!