Really Fi? REALLY? and after all this she still Picks Jonathan!? Outrage! but i guess the heart wants what the heart wants right? I just hope she takes Viktor's advice and doesn't go right to Jonathan right away.... Ohhhh where is she off to!! Loved the chapter even though i'm not liking Fiona's life choices..... hahaha
she.must.be.with.jon. how can she turn him down?? AHHH! but i feel like she'll never know unless she's gives him the chance and she still has some lingering feelings
I feel as though team Jon is fighting a losing battle :( Makes me sad. That being said, I don't think I've ever been this invested in a story and which way it could go. So good!
you know, I was disappointed when Fiona slept with Viktor - when she knew she was seeing Jon the next day. And it wasnt just any day - it was Christmas day...that is special. She should have waited.
But then after she slept with Viktor, she thought of Jon. Never a good sign for a future relationship.
Fiona had been looking for signs that Jon could change and he gave the biggest one to her - his Parents. He would NEVER have introduced those other women to his parents. She knew he was sorry- she knew he loved her...BUT she still walked away????
I agree with a few of the other comments - it feels like Fiona is settling for what is easy.
I was so excited for this chapter and then I read it. lol. Your writing & the emotion you bring is still as amazing as ever but ugh - did she really just walk away from Jon? How dumb is this girl?! Stalberg is a consolation prize. Runner-up. 2nd best. A participation ribbon. A shoot-out win - better than no points but still not a victory. Boo Fiona! BOOOOOOO!
My brain is mush. This chapter was hard to read for me. I don't like what's happening with Jon. I feel really bad for him, & I still don't feel the spark between Fiona & Viktor that I do when she's with Jon. This just goes to show how good of a writer you are, because you're making me feel real emotions.