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  • Galaxia;

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    NO. NO. NO. NO!

    Usually I'm able to read your *ahem* "scenes", but I just COULDN'T read Viktor and Fiona's. It just seemed so wrong! I understand how everyone likes Viktor cause he's so "sweet", "kind" yada yada yada. But I just can't see them together! Viktor is TOO innocent for Fi. Jon is literally the perfect match for Fiona. I love the two together because they just belong together. I can't even explain it!

    Fiona better decide something quick. Because it not, I'm inserting myself into the story and giving Fi a yelling of a life time. She needs to do something because you can't have t
    January 2nd, 2012 at 01:52am
  • therealdeal

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    Team Viktor! Totally hot chapter! I can't wait to see what Jon's going to say on their little dinner 'date'!
    January 2nd, 2012 at 01:48am
  • ThePriceIsRight

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    I've been team Viktor throughout the entire story! Hes just soo sweet to her and I think that she needs someone like that.
    January 2nd, 2012 at 01:30am
  • Emiliana

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    I can't. I still don't necessarily like that she slept with Viktor, but the chapter was perfectly written, as usual. Jon is going to kill him. Happy New Year!
    January 1st, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • LDW Choice

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    Is it too late to vote for Jonathan? He may seem like an ass, but still the favorite of mine!
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:30pm
  • welcometotheshow

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    no! but yes! god you make it so hard to a side! i want to like Jon, but Viktor is so nice... ah! please just finish this story, i'm going crazy
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:06pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    Oh my God this chapter!!
    First off... UNF! Unf unf unf!
    Viktor was just so perfect and so unbelievably sweet and caring and just golden! It was the polar opposite from Jonathan, he was rough and possessive. I mean he literally walked into her shower uninvited and just had his way with her. Vik was so sweet and made sure she was okay with everything.
    Also I get that Jonathan is trying to change but I still don't think he's right for Fi! Maybe he does need to lose her to learn a life lesson and then maybe when the right girl for him comes along he'll know what to do!
    Can not wait To see what kind of thing Jonathan pulls off for their dinner.....
    Love love loved the update!
    January 1st, 2012 at 08:42pm
  • fica

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    Oh my gosh!! Jon better win her over!!
    January 1st, 2012 at 08:37pm
  • abyssopelagic;

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    Such a good chapter! I'm so glad they evened the playing field (; hahahah. I'm still rooting for Viktor...I mean, he's just so beautiful and sweet and caring. Jon's an ass. He doesn't deserve her! Please update soooooon(: Happy New Year!
    January 1st, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • pineapple55

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    Sex scene was perfect. I am really excited to see what Jon has in store for Fiona!
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • temporarylove

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    I have no debates anymore...I really want her to be with Viktor but I have a feeling she has to end up with Jon... lds;af

    Keep on, keeping on.
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • LoveGame13

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    I really want Jon to be with Fiona, is that so bad? haha. I love Viktor though, so that's okay... I wish they'd fight over me too !!!
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    Jonathan who?

    And I must add, because the crazy Finnish girl inside of me is screaming to be heard, that Santa is Finnish and Lapland is actually in Northern Finalnd ;)
    December 31st, 2011 at 09:57am
  • Danielle Nicole;

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    JON JON JON!!
    I think a little piece of my fictional story heart broke when she
    said she liked vic.
    I hope she decides to leave & 'accidentally' runs into Jon.
    December 31st, 2011 at 07:28am
  • Cupcake1

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    Ahhh! This is so good! I think she should end up with Jon; she has real feelings for him whereas it just seems that she's lusting after Viktor. Can't wait for more!
    December 31st, 2011 at 06:11am
  • allykat22

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    I’m so conflicted. I can see it going either way. I’m leaning towards Stalberg. Then Toews can use this as lesson on how not to act with the next girl. Whoever she doesn’t end up with needs their own story.
    December 31st, 2011 at 05:28am
  • Galaxia;

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    PLEASE LET HER END WITH JON.

    He's a fuck up. But they complete each other.

    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE.
    December 31st, 2011 at 05:16am
  • long leather wings.

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    I. Pick. Viktor. I love Toews, but fuck him. PLEASE LET HER END UP WITH VIIIIIIIIK! The guy who loves the girl first doesn't always get her. Can't the asshole guy friend lose for once? Lmaoo, please?
    December 31st, 2011 at 05:15am
  • Emiliana

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    I do not want Fiona to have sex with Viktor. I feel like this will only complicate things more & I've decided I want her to end up with Jon. He will be devastated if he knows she slept with Viktor the day before Christmas. (I know it's probably only fair since she's had to see the parade of sluts he's brought home, but still) The next chapter might kill me. UGH.
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:22am
  • Sparxx

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    Ok so I've been in the hospital with my stupid appendix so I had advance to read this whole story and I gotta tell u. This story is amazingly awesome and driving me crazy!!!! I can't decide who 2 root 4 and that never happens 2 me I swear!!! So congrats on another amazing story can't wait 2 see where it goes!!! :)
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:00am