GroupThink - Comments

So for your layout, while I love the picture and how it goes along with the title, the green is a little off putting. Otherwise, it was easy to read, which is a big plus.

The dialogue in the summary, while interesting, seems a bit too formal. Most people use contractions, but it definitely got me wondering.

As for the prologue, I think you should continue. It got me interested in the story, and gave enough background that it didn't leave me completely in the dark.

Can't wait to see what you do with this.

Wow, this sounds really good so far, and I can't tell where it's going, so that intrigues me even more. I like the simplicty of the first chapter, but it's still good, and no spelling or grammar mistakes, so good job on that. The title at the beginning of the first chapter annoyed me a bit because it's kinda off to the side, maybe it was supossed to be like that? Anyways, that was the only think I didn't like, althought it does give it originality. The banner and background fit perfectly, and I just love the picture of the room with empty chairs.

Overall, this is a very good beginning and I'd like to see more and see what becomes of it, you've set it up to be very good. =)

I think this is a very good idea. I like the summary which just got my attention and want to read more, and when I did read it I just got hooked and instantly became fond of it. This is like really good and perfect so you should continue it.

oh, man.
This looks good. Like, really good.
Maybe just because I love hospitals, but who knows.
It has me intrigued, and I honestly look forward to reading more

The summary had me like <<<o.o>>> LOL, love it, the only thing was that thwere a few mispelt words, like one..or two I think; nothing great. I wuv it :P. <subs>

I'm intruigued!
It sounds really official and stuff, so I really can't wait until it's updated!
I love it!
Eeeep, I'll wait patiently for an update!