The things Iann does to John! He hates blood! Really, really love his character! And I don't get why Dani is mad at him. Dani is weird. She's mad at him for saving her life?! God! I thought John kissed her or something like that! D: love how he droved all the way to her! :)
Ohyogd shut up there was so much raw emotion in that last chapter it was reaaly beautiful okay aee look i cabt even spell right its 11:00 and im tired but im reading your story cause its beyond perfect but you think it isnt sogh you writers are as deep as cole sprouse sigh kennyways its a great chapter and the rest were great too i couldnt understand the chapter with day 4 much but maybz its cause im sleepy idk ill re-read it but yeah great stuff i've missed your writing and the john ohh and yeah your story feels soo real like i can hear them in my head speaking those words which is quite scary in my opinion cause its like wow i think it will happen or has happened and yeah you know so okay good luck with the writing stay super cool
holy shit, so much going on in that chapter, but it was really good!! At least John saved Dani before, even if it made Dani hate John, and I'm starting to worry about Iann, everything bad is happening to her it seems. Update soon, really soon? :)
I decided to comment again because you were doubting yourself, ahaha. I've been a silent reader because I like how it's going so far. This chapter was really nice okay, don't change it, just continue writing and update as soon as possible. I hope to hear from you!!