Famous Most Wanted - Comments

OH MY FREAKDFAISNDKLFAJDSK;LGHKLDS;GHDSKLFJAKLDSFJD dammit woman. That was one of the most enticing storied I have read. I went into it thinking, "yeah I'm sure this is great but eh" and now I'm like "HOLY SHIT OH MFKLDSJ;AFKLSDJKLFJADSKLFJSDKLFUCKLSKDJFAKLDS G" Like shit.
Throughout the whole story, Johnny was the one who was the mystery and confusing but I think Taylor is just as mysterious as Mr. Carolina. There is something about her....I can't put my finger on it. I am also interested finding out whats going to happen to the band now and how things will change. I can't believe this. I was totally not expecting this story to end up like this. I'm still dreaming about how Johnny and Taylor will end up together and end up the little cottage in Wales together and it will be perfect.
You left me with so many questions I don't even know where to begin. All I know is that I love this. I love your writing. I love you. Seriously. I am on the the sequel without a doubt.
LOVE

And and ps. Fuck Grace man.

Are you serious!? You're not giving me a proper ending!? Damn. Haha well I seriously enjoyed that. Oh dear. I totally fell in love with both characters and I loved both their personalities. The story was amazing! On with the sequel!

S'all mine. :) Thanks.
That's probably one of my favourite lines in the story too.
Always thought people throw the word Fate around too easily. If Fate actually happens, it doesn't happen often, I don't think. Whereas Luck is a lot more common.

Anyway, sorry to go all deep on you there. Thanks for reading. :)

"Luck, often mistaken for fate, was a wonderful thing"
That is seriously such an awesome sentence. Like, I read that, and it just brought a smile to my face. Is that a quote you heard from somewhere or did you come up with it yourself?

ALLSTARLOVE333, my lovely, if that's what you want, that is what you shall have. :)
I warn you though the story isn't finished so the updates will get so far and then stop until a time where I have finished. I could even upload each new chapter as I write it, which is not something I have done before as I like to have it complete to upload at my leasure, but I understand I left the story open and I'm taking forever.
But I'll upload the first chapter of 'I'm With The Band' today. :)

I want whatever you have! seriously I'm dying here! I come on like every week or so to see if the sequel is up!

I'm also dying to know what will happen to johnny and tex now :DD

Awww I hope u'll put the sequel up soon cuz this story was far too brilliant. I could kill for your writing skills, I'm really in love with ur work.

Hi guys.
Not sure if you'll read this but I just want to say thank you to everyone who's read this and also a huge sorry that I've been lapse with the sequel.
It's true, I haven't finished writing the sequel yet, but If you would like me to upload what I have so far, though it will only go half way through at the moment, it may leave a slightly better taste in your mouths with this storyline.
Alot is resolved within the first half of the sequel I've already written so you may feel better about it.
So, if you want what I have so far, rather than all of it, tell me and it's yours.
Thanks again for everyone's patience.

Well. Not going to lie. I really regret reading this. Because I didn't get my happy ending and the sequel isn't posted and finished so I'm left hanging here with unfinished business. Completely and utterly unfinished. Like someone else, I literally read this whole story in one go. At first, I was struggling to get into it but the storyline sounded really interesting so I wanted to try. Then, before I knew it, I couldn't stop reading. This story was just great. And I'd really, really like to read the sequel now pleaseee. <3

great story!! omg wen is seque;ll tiem? is it sequel time??? must have sequel????

Read this in one go. Amazing! I really liked that Johnny was a fictional character so the story isn't fan-fiction. There is just too much fan-fiction out there. Definitely subscribing to the sequel.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
I read alot of stories on here and never understand how characters can change personality so easily. I try to think of this when I write mine and remember who my characters are and still keep a part of that as they change.
I'm pleased you noticed this in my writing, cause the subtle changes in characters to bring a couple closer is what I try to work on.
I like the concept of two totaly different people from two totaly different worlds coming together, changing each other and finding love in one another.

Sorry for the disappointing ending, but it's necessary, for in the sequel I bring them back together, make them realise how much they depend on each other.

Not sure when the sequel will be finished, but I'm working on it and full of ideas, so hopefully writing it should be a breeze for me. :)
Thank you for reading.

I'm beyond obsessed with this. Your characters are amazing and beautifully shaped. The foreshadowing you have throughout is unlike any I've ever seen in a story on Mibba. Just everything is perfect. Until you ended it like that and completely devastated me!! Now I have to go and wait for this sequel, and I'm not a particularly patient person, haha. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!! :)

Please tell me they meet in Texas?!

Alright so I kind of hate you right now but not really... this seriously KILLS me! but Johnny is an idiot he admitted he liked her for the chase and now he expects her to wait for him as if she thought she meant so much more to him! he is an IDIOT! and maybe NOW he will realize what they had was more, it was LOVE!

and Taylor you're an idiot you should have waited for him because you love him! I get quitting, but go to him! seriously! he should release that song he wrote her... just saying....

upload the sequel PLEASE!!!

*begins to read the author's note*
*gives you an innocent why are you looking at me look*
what psh I only commented a little... (please not the joking tone)

Don't go!!! just continue this story post the sequel!

but you were right I don't like this ending... I'm disappointed I won't lie I mean it was a great ending but they aren't together!

She should visit Texas... just saying...

So please update with the sequel and tell me you did it so I can read it :D

shutting up now.............

Haha, you may not like the ending, but maybe I could upload the first chapter of the sequel just to get the ball rolling.
Thanks, you don't have to comment at all. It's nice that you give me any kind of feedback at all. :)

Alright well I was liking this chapter and then they got caught... :/ kill joy! and can't wait for the sequel!!! :D I'm excited for that! and one more chapter... O.O excited!!! :D alright this is a short one sorry... not in that talking (commenting/typing) mood...

Haha, yeah, only two left. :( Lol.
Don't worry, there's a sequel, I just haven't finished writing it yet so it may not be uploaded for a little while, but trust me, it'll be up here at some point cause I'm full of ideas for it, I just occasionally lack motivation to write it. But I will try and get back in to the swing of it. If nothing else, I want to finish it just so you can read it as I'm sure the ending to this one wont be what you expect from me. The sequel is pretty vital.

I've no plans of changing sites. Don't really know any others. It's not something I really look into. The layout sucks, but it doesn't effect the story layouts so that's one plus. I'll just have to be a man and grin and bare it, I guess. :P
Thank you for commenting,

and thank you to everyone who reads. Means loads.

I know I'm not a big fan of mibba's new layout either :/ but I'm a little more used to it because I got to start using it early (a perk of being on the mibba mag staff) if you decide to change sites PLEASE let me know!!!

and poor Taylor she is just mentally preparing herself for him to up and leave... :/ and honestly Johnny is stupid you don't write a song for anyone, let alone a LOVE SONG!!! (by the way I LOVE the lyrics!!!) he is ridiculous! really! anyway he is an idiot and will realize once he leaves and tried to hit on that first girl... it won't be the same, and the first time he sings that song when she isn't there... only two chapters left!!! :o

If you change sites SERIOUSLY let me know... PLEASE