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  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    Haha. Go head. Give her a massive slap. Btw, this is only the begining of what Grace sells to the papers. She gets so much worse.
    She's probably my favourite bitch to write because she is such a bitch, she's so easy.

    Anyway, glad you're enjoying it.
    Thank you for you consistant comments. Makes me grin like this --> :D

    B -x
    February 25th, 2012 at 06:45pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    can I slap Grace across the face? can I also go and yell at the reporters that they are idiot? if this was real life and I could do that I TOTALLY would!
    February 25th, 2012 at 05:48pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I love Montana! He is awesome telling it to her straight! :D bam! And she has a name! Yay! :) except now he wants to sleep with her like she is one of those girls... Sigh... Well I love that chapter though it was a shorter one. And she is changing him for the better yay! And your cat sounds awesome lol and yay for coco!
    February 18th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    Thank you so much!!
    I love you and your wonderful comments. :D
    And don't worry. There'll be more Johnny/Taylor time in the next one.
    Cheeeeers. :P

    B -x
    February 11th, 2012 at 05:20pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    This story is so brilliant I don't think you understand! I love the set up of the chapter with the ordering and everything! I wish there was more of her and Carolina, but I mean what can you write when they are stranded with puzzles so I get it... He is falling for her... Yay!
    February 11th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    Ending was simply an amazing touch! Seriously! I really am loving this story! Can't wait for next week's post :)
    February 4th, 2012 at 03:55pm
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    Aww, thank you XP I know, they're such an unlikely couple yet strangely made for each other. Lol.
    And I do see what you mean about the breaks being British. Never noticed that before.

    I mean, being British, I just write it how I would say it rather than thinking how it would be said in America (which, really, I have no idea how it would be said)
    This is far more natural to me I guess. Easier to write. Especially as I love books basied on rockstars. Just so fun to write about their crazy shit. Lol.

    But I'm pleased you're not finding it boring. Cheers for reading. ;D

    B -x
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:04am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I know you are! and you do a GREAT job of character build up and the gradualness of fallin in love without making it boring, but of course I'm always thinking just GET together already! of course that would take the fun out of the story!

    This is the part I thought sounded very British... maybe cause there was bloke written in there twice.. I'm not sure... also I feel the breaks and dialect isn't American yup :P but hey us Americans LOVE British accents so British win :)

    "'When we had our first tour in America years ago. A mountain of a bloke called Raul. He was Puerto Rican. Massive guy. Fucking terrifying to look at but he was a big gay bear really. Cried at the drop of a hat. Real sentimental bloke.'"

    and I'm happy you like being my dealer otherwise I was gonna have a little trouble :P
    January 21st, 2012 at 05:15am
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    Hahaha! Oh Lily you do make me smile, love. :)
    Maybe I am an eccentric, sexy Hermione Granger, except I have long balck hair and a fringe. Lol :P
    Except she's a lot posher than me, though I can do a posh accent. All I have to do is pronounce all my T's and H's. :P
    I'm deffinitely eccentric though. Lol.

    And thank you. Glad you like it. :)
    January 15th, 2012 at 08:20pm
  • Anonymous1460

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    Oh, my love. Whenever I think of you when I read comments and authors notes, the image that comes to mind is and eccentric, and sexy Hermione Granger, with nice hair. Makes me smile. I love your work dear. Your charactor developement skills are absolutely fantastic. <3
    xoxo Lily
    January 15th, 2012 at 06:57pm
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    It's not terrible. It's great. So happy you commented again. :)
    And I'm intrigued. Which part mad eJohnny sound really British? Lol

    And that's okay. I like being your dealer. ;)

    B -x
    January 15th, 2012 at 12:15pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    God its snowy here to in a place that isn't England! Lol yeah I like Johnny but now I'm so fucking curious about his name! Gosh u don't even know... I feel like books are my drugs and I have many dealers (Aka authors) but ur one of the best dealers... That didn't sound child appropriate... I hope no little kid reads this :o dude Johnny sounded so British at one point I laughed cause I loved it so much :) you said to comment anything so I'm trying to do that but I feel awkward cause this is a terrible and weird comment so peace till next comment :p
    January 15th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • get up and go.

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    I can't believe there are so few comments on this story so I wanted to say that I think it's great so far.
    I loved 'The Rebel Apprentice' and I'm very excited for this new story. I can't wait for the next update :)

    (I'm sorry if my english is not good)
    January 15th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    allstarlove333, thank you! X)
    Made me smile.

    Little stuck for ideas with RA sequel at the mo, so I'm going to finish another story first that I've been working on so I can consentrate on the RA sequel. :)
    Thanks for reading and commenting. Makes my day.

    Cheers M'dears.

    B -x
    January 15th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    God you're an amazing writer!! Legit it's ridiculous how good you are... Anyway I love this story! It's unique! I love that! I can't wait for more! (whenever that is... In a week?)

    More Rebel's apprentice!?!? Now that my dear gets me very VERY excited! GAH :) hope you post I soon... Or in reality that you post it eventually! :D
    January 14th, 2012 at 02:29am
  • LipStickAndShotGuns

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    Hey Lily, good to know your imbracing your inner cockney ;) Lol. See, I'm not a Londoner, but I was raised by Southern parents so I have a cockney tang myself and it only gets stronger when I'm angry. XD
    But anyway, I'm pleased you like it already.

    Thank you to everyones comments so far. It's lovely. :)

    B -x
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:46pm
  • Anonymous1460

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    Hey lovebug,
    It's actually quite funny, but I've gone through quite a bit of vocal training and I was recently in the play ''A Christmas Carol'' so I've been talking in a bit of a british accent lately as it's stuck to my American accent a bit. When I read this, I sounded like a cockney woman (that's what I played(Mrs. Dilbur)) Quite wonderful, I love the way this is playing out already! Absolutely fantastic. You had me before, but you've really got me hooked now. (: Happy new years, B!
    xoxo Lily
    December 31st, 2011 at 08:40am
  • I Heart Monsters ; ;

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    I'm super excited for this. I loved The Rebel's Apprentice. Can't wait for the next update(:
    December 25th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • Anonymous1460

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    Oh dear, it's wonderful.
    Your already doing great, love.
    I'm a star, awwh, thanks.
    See you next week!
    xoxo Lily
    December 24th, 2011 at 08:09pm
  • Gisaon

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    Interesting. (: I like it.
    Update soon.
    December 24th, 2011 at 01:12pm