What You Know Is True - Comments

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I only read the first chapter, but your story seems interesting. The layout is simple and pleasing to the eyes. I love that it's not overdone, it helps to make the photo stand out. The summary was well written. It was very ambiguous which I prefer to the usual summary that gives everything away. Now having only read the first chapter, I didn't get a complete understanding of what the story is about yet, but you established Dallas extremely well. Your description goes above and beyond just a surface character. I can tell you have given him real thought and that he has depth. It's refreshing. Great first chapter. (:

Oh my God...oh my God! I am just so speechless. This was just a fine example of great stories, wow, you had me crying by the end of this story. I am actually recovering from child sexual abuse...and oh my God. It was just perfect. Your writing was amazing, not too loaded, but just right. This needs more recs.

Beautifully written. I applied you, darling!

This is a great character, and there are already many dimensions showing through the demeanor and physicality. There's even some really cleverly added humor woven throughout the narrative. Very solid first chapter!

I haven't read the whole thing yet, but so far I'm very intrigued. I have so many questions. Your writing style is very good, your sentence structure simple and everything flows easily which makes it easy to read. You're doing a good job of building up the suspense about Josee and on if the book is real magic or not. That part confuses me a bit, because it seemes like there are two things going on that have nothing to do with each other? But I'm going to go finish reading your story now :)

Okay so I subscribed to this story a couple of days ago after searching.the tags African American and I saw this and gave it a shot. Well, im happy I gave it a shot because I just read the rest tonight. And mind me its late and I say some crazy shit at night. Lemme tell you its once in a lifetime when I fully read a mibba story. This story was more than compelling, beyond my words. Now its too late for me to cry but if I was fully in the right mind I would. Damn, I wish more stories were like this on mibba. Most people try to make it a corny love story. But no, this story was really beautiful. I have a soft spot for sexually abused people and you hit it in a good way. Now I'm going on a "Ayana at night" rant so I'm gonna stop.

this is really interesting. i'm only a few chapters in but i'm really hooked. the writing is good, and the way that you've written the narration is really nice. it definitely feels like you're in their head it's great. i really can't wait to read the rest of this. <33

Awwww :3 that's such a cute ending!!!

I locked myself in the bathroom to read this...

I cried. No shame.
One of the best stories I read in a while actually. Lemme know if your gonna have another fic up? I'd love to read them. :)

Still in public. Still can't cry.

I like the title and the layout of this story a lot! Your writing flows very well and doesn't seem choppy. It's intriguing and made me want to keep going. I enjoyed this a lot. Nice job! Oh and the picture is perfect! I forgot to say that in my last comment

Kristen :)

Even more emotional now. But I can't cry cause I'm in public.

I like the title and the layout of this story a lot! Your writing flows very well and doesn't seem choppy. It's intriguing and made me want to keep going. I enjoyed this a lot. Nice job!

Kristen :)

Holy shit. You sure know how to make a girl get all emotional. My eyes are burning and I got a lump the size of a baseball in my throat.

Definitely. That's why I haven't left the house since the 20th. Hermits ftw.

Great chapter. Did I ever tell you how amazing you are? Because you are.

I really like the title of the story, as well as the summary. The beginning was really good and hooks the reader in. The way it’s written with description, and detail. Awesome story; keep up the great writing!

I really enjoyed reading this story! I honestly have no complaints. Your characterization was good, it flowed really nicely and you kept it consistently interesting. It was witty, well- written, and overall just excellent.

I like this title better too.
I was wondering if you were ever going to run out of chapter titles. XD
Plus, I think the banner is more revelant to the story. It's cool. :)

I really like this. Dallas is so real. His emotions and train of thought are so raw and open that it's hard to imagine that he isn't real. You really are a gifted writer. And I'm glad that you shared your talent with us and that I got to read it.

I really like this. Dallas is so real. His emotions and train of thought are so raw and open that it's hard to imagine that he isn't real. You really are a gifted writer.