Don't Make This Easy, I Want You To Mean It - Comments

@ SchitzoFranic
Well.. Oh well, I suppose. I'm sure what you have is nice.

@ NauticalNonsense;;
Honestly. It probably won't ever come off hiatus. Its an old story and I have so many new ones to take care of and the other writer has a lot on her plate these days...

@ SchitzoFranic
Well shoot, that makes me lean towards not reading it. But hey! Whenever the hiatus is up, you could just comment here & I'd most likely invest in reading it.

@ NauticalNonsense;;
The sequel is unfinished and on indefinite hiatus. Just a warning! :)

Sorry for posting that twice. I accidentally pushed submit twice. /:

So yeah, stumbled upon this through the comment swap. I know this was written a year ago or so, but I hope you guys have fixed your writing style.
What I mean by that is the whole writing a sentence and going to the next line. It doesn't look very neat in my opinion.

I read the first nine chapters.. They were a little rough but still good. I really enjoyed the characters though. You made me laugh which is hard to do when I'm reading.

I skipped to the last three chapters so I don't know much about the whole Lisa thing. The story ended differently than I had originally anticipated. I subscribed though. Maybe I'll read the other chapters and take a gander at the sequel. I'm a little undecided for now.

So yeah, stumbled upon this through the comment swap. I know this was written a year ago or so, but I hope you guys have fixed your writing style.
What I mean by that is the whole writing a sentence and going to the next line. It doesn't look very neat in my opinion.

I read the first nine chapters.. They were a little rough but still good. I really enjoyed the characters though. You made me laugh which is hard to do when I'm reading.

I skipped to the last three chapters so I don't know much about the whole Lisa thing. The story ended differently than I had originally anticipated. I subscribed though. Maybe I'll read the other chapters and take a gander at the sequel. I'm a little undecided for now.

@ ironi1234
Hey umm... Thanks for the whole big review thing but this story is really old and was just a silly little thing we made and were excited about at the time. I'm really really sorry you kinda wasted time typing for this old thing. Its kinda dead now....

*Comment Swap*
Um ok so I only read the first two chapters because so many things bothered me. Everything was going so fast with no explanation. Why would you get on a bus with someone you don't know? Why would they just decide to sleep together in the same bed? Why after that, would Jack suggest they'd stay forever?
The whole "we're arguing about your future" sentence made me furious. Why would they suggest that? They no nothing about the girls they somehow invited to their bus. Who are they to legitimately say that they get to decide if they stay or not?
The writing itself is pretty good. I think you need to work on your characters. For example, a girl thats been abused might be more suspicious to people trying to hurt her. Similarly I think you can add a lot more depth to Jack and Zacks characters more than the normal crazy loud funny and quiet reasonable.
Maybe I'm wrong or you fixed these things in the next chapters, I don't know. Either way, these are just my thoughts. Best of luck!

@ jennyjenmcjennifer
Yes the sequel is indeed up :) there should be a link to it at the top of the page. Forewarning you our sequel is on hiatus at the moment...

WHAT IS THE SEQUEL CALLED? HAS IT ALREADY BEEN POSTED? CAN I DIE?

@ forever_hustler
I'm so glad you like it. We are working on the sequel right now so hang on tight!

this is absolutely perfect. it's hands down one of my favorite stories & I'm so excited to read the sequel !

oh my god . this story is so perfect ! I really like how you waited before the couples kissed & didn't rush into the relationships, it makes everything way cuter (:

soooo cute !!!!

I love this story so fucking much you better get writing that sequel !!!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!!

GAH. MORE. NOW. Please and thank you. (And have them punch the bitch some more.)

I only read the first chapter yet, but I already really like it. :D I love how crazy you made the girls, especially Ember :D As far as I can see, there aren't any spelling or grammar mistakes, but I could've overread some cause english isn't my fdirst language ;D I also really like your style of writing and the end of the chapter is really cute and adorable :3

Same, had to use default layout. And sorry to spam, I just got this on comment swap again. anyways, i cant believe you're rewriting, i thought it was very very good. I like how they all just joke around and you have very good description. Like I said before, very good overall story :)