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  • LDW Choice

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    Your layout didn't allow me to read the story and so I went to the default layout. Overall, you have some grammar mistakes that could be fixed, you could use more sentences and less exclamation in some parts. And it has a good plot line, so fix your grammatical errors and it should be a good story. Good luck.
    June 21st, 2012 at 03:40pm
  • Robintheegreat

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    I love this story! Very intense and yea its pretty sad in the begining. You have a very good overall plot and the characterization is very interesting. I also really like your picture thing. It's very pretty!:) seems you have a very good overall story on you're hands :P
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:36pm
  • Clarity

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    Omg, the beginning is EXTREMELY sad, at the memory flashback. I uh, used to be abused by my father and so yeah... It's kind of hard to deal with. But, no I've never been perfect and I'm not even graduated yet, I'm in the 11th grade now. Umm. Other than that the rest of your story seems really good. :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • weeezer100

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    hah the ending made me laugh! love this story!
    June 4th, 2012 at 03:19pm
  • The Silence;

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    I absolutely love this story! :) update soon :)
    June 4th, 2012 at 07:49am
  • lindsay0414

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    Thumbs up! Good job!!! Can't wait for more :)
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:31pm
  • RockPrincess16

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    I absolutely adore this story. Its so cute!
    Please write more<3
    January 16th, 2012 at 04:52pm
  • DearDelanie

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    I told my friend about your story n.n she loves All Time Low :3 so ima have her make an account and read this n.n ill have her subscribe as well :)
    January 15th, 2012 at 12:55am
  • DearDelanie

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    XD lol yeah i met her threw imvu.. BTW.....IM LIKE DYING FROM THE AMAZINGNESS like when she told me about 18 and 19 were up...i like exploded i just finished reading too :D Wannttss morree x-x i wish i was good at writing stories like you 2 xD
    January 13th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • DearDelanie

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    THIS IS AMAZINNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ~dies from amazingness~
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:35pm
  • colddarkheart

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    :) I love love love this! New update soon? Yeah?? Pretty flippin Please!
    January 8th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • stainedglasseyes.

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    Omg I love this story... Matt being such a douche just makes it even better :')
    December 23rd, 2011 at 03:36pm
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