Until Tomorrow - Comments

THIS IS SO CUTE OKAY? OKAY.
I'm starting with the end because I love it so damn much.

“Two Door Cinema Club, The Killers, Vampire Weekend, Augustana., The Smiths…” Whakaio said, going through the CDs. “You like indie music, huh?” Becca pushed the money over the counter, grabbing the CDs and shoving them in her bag.

First of all, fabulous taste there man. Two Door Cinema Club, just shoot me I love them so much. Ugh all these bands are great so obviously Whak needs to say something.

“Only on Wednesdays,” she muttered, before shuffling quickly out of the store.

You sarcastic little buttmunch. ONLY ON WEDNESDAYS. Oh yeah? Only then? I love you so much this is so funny can I use this line always? Yes. The next part I screamed.

Whakaio stared after her, wondering what music she liked on Thursdays, and if she’d be back to buy it the following day like he hoped she would.

JUST KILL ME. WHAKAIO JUST STARING OUT AFTER YOU AS YOU LEAVE CASUALLY WONDERING WHAT OTHER MUSIC YOU'LL PULL OUT OF YOUR ASS AND HOPING THAT HE'LL SEE YOU AGAIN BECAUSE HE LOOOOOOOOOOOOVES YOU, HE WANTS TO TOOOOOOOUCH YOU, HE WANTS TO KISSSSSSSSSSSSS YOU.

Okay, sorry that was somewhat unnecessary, ahem.
Anyway, I love the idea of a small music store that can't compare with big ones but is, in reality, always going to be better than its competitors. I love the idea that it's a safe haven for you and a place for you to get away. Like, some metaphorical shit about how music is always that one thing we turn to for safety and then a MUSIC STORE is the one place you can physically go for safety aw clever Becca.

“Yeah, I have this problem where I’m too fucking awesome for people to handle,” she said.
ACCURATE.
We both have this problem it's why Whak loves us in real life duh.

UGH, this story always has me looking in the mirror saying, "Kelly you dumb slut go back home, go to your family, they MISS you. Why won't you just go home? C'mon now don't be a little shit." Unfortunately, this is only fiction after all and my home isn't really in Australia, even if my heart is :3

Oh my god, I love this idea about how I'm such a fab actress~
Recycling personalities is such a good way to put it though. I like that a lot. It's super chic and k3wl.

Let's move on to Cam, shall we?
You can fix me all you want bby but I have to be difficult first, sorry. I have this problem in my brain that's called I can't let anyone in because I'm an idiot. Sorry man, just keep trying.

Honestly, stop writing so flawlessly. You're making the rest of us look bad.

btw, you're endlessly making the rest of the world's population look bad in everything you do. so just stop. like before you do something, think 'i'm going to make everyone look bad' and then cease action. thanks.

FIRST AND FOREMOST, let it be known that I would never runaway without taking you with me. I like running, I hope you do too.

Becca was just the one that always got left behind, because she was replaceable, and not at all extraordinary.

This is a lie of course, you are rather irreplaceable and altogether more than extraordinary. But honestly, I love this line and I love that it was an ending line. It just packs the punch, you know? It seriously shows how much Becca misses Kelly (you miss me? x] awkward). In any case, no matter how untrue this sentence is, I love it.

Just the fact that you get the fact that I run is unbelievable. I mean, I've never physically left home but I'm a runner. It's amazing that you write it that way. I don't feel guilty about leaving people. It's an actual issue. There are, of course, certain limitations on who I feel guilty about but generally I'm guiltless when it comes to stuff like that. I run from my problems and from confrontation so yeah, chapter 3 is all up in my face and super real to me. I loved it. Just so short and simple and relatable and ugh stop writing such fabulous stories.

It's just, sad. I guess you never realize what an impact your family has on you until you lose someone who chooses to go willingly. I mean, I can only imagine how it would feel for my parents if I just up and left. For my brother, ten times worse. So BOOM I understand this chapter. It leaves me feeling kind of melancholy, yeah? Just kind of down. But then, it's like hopeful too because when someone chooses to go willingly they usually choose to come back too. I'm excited for that part.

This is so deep tho. I mean, the story and this comment. I'm not being LIGHTHEARTED. Fuck, I'm not being my usual sarcastic, cheerful self. It's okay though. I love this story. As in, I'm literally in love with it. Will you marry me? Please. Thanks. Okay. Update so that when I wake up I can flail in my bed with excitement and just die.

Oh and Pete Wentz fux with you bye.

Comment virginity taken by the great big dick named Kelly ;*
Merry Christmas Becca!

Okay, I'm so in love with this.
You have the ability to make me fall in love with you and myself. I mean, really, am I like a canvas? Regardless, I would never be able to leave you with no goodbye. Even though that seems to be a passing trend in both of our new stories. I'm so excited for this. I actually even forgot that Cam and Whak were even going to be in this it was so flawless.

Ugh, I can't wait for more. Now we have two stories to bribe each other with, jesus.