The Heart of Neverland - Comments

I also wanted to put in that I loved the prologue and the quote by Peter in the summary!! (Sorry. I have a bad time remembering things! xD)

I love Peter Pan!!! xD

Your style of writing really fits the story well; I like it a lot. The description is good and I find the layout really cute. :)

There were a few minor typo errors, but nothing that took away from the story.

I'm subbing to this! xD

I like your style of writing.
The transition between chapters was perfect, and I liked how the first chapter ended at a cliffhanger.
(I have a soft spot for them since I use them in my writing as well.)

This story has many possibilities and I can't wait to find out what Wendy will do next.
Although I do have an inkling of what she will attempt. . .

I love this, I used to stay up at night dreaming of being Peter Pant. I love how you kept this real and not some weird freaky version. Truly a wonderful story!

I absolutely love this. Peter Pan was one of my favorites when I was small. I'm very excited that you wrote this because you can never find good classics like Peter now. I'm subscribing because it seems very real and modest, which I happen to love!

OHMYGOSH PETER PAN. I am in love with him. Just- thank you for writing this. <3

"The night had been a delicious dream..." I love that line. Even though it's just the beginning, I love this story.