Bulletproof Heart - Comments

Great story!

Lol, I like this story, your character description is awesome! All in all this is a great story! Well detailed throughout and I loved the interaction with the characters, and the small moments of comedy. For a fan fiction this is really good! Keep up the great work!

This is based on the first part of the story mainly because I like to give people my first impressions. I've read so many band fan fics on comment swap it's not even funny. But I like how you take a classic story line and make it your own with the character. I hope further in the story she gets developed more. The only thing I saw it in the beginning, the transitions from things could be a little cleaner. Other than that nice voice and keep up the good work.

ohmydamn! whats going to happen to her? that creep! please update again soon?

how do you not have more comments? i really like your story, keep it up!

I really enjoy your story. Its really well written :) Please update soon?