Requiem. - Comments

I know, I realised that when I re-read it the other day. Thank you, though. I'll go change that now. That was the exact photos I was basing it off of, actually. I'm glad you think it worked well.
Thank you for the story comment, I'm really happy you liked it. ^_^

I clicked the link to Matthew's cover of Video Games before I started reading, so that flowed really, really well. I've never heard that before. So thank you for that.

"Because I love her. I'm engaged to her, we're going to get married one day and because she loves me. Pretty sure any five year old could work that out, Splattering, but obviously you're a bit thicker than I thought."

Just a random thought but, wouldn't Matt refer to Clint as "Ellis"? I thought Splattering was more his stage name, which is kinda stupid because he adds fans on facebook under "Clint Owen Ellis", haha.

Also, I think his girlfriend's name is "Kirsty", but I'm not sure...

I recalled the memory of the brief times I'd spent with Kristy, remembering the time she photographed me whilst I slept and woke me up with the flash before taking another photo of my foggy eyes while she still had the chance.

I love that because it reminds me of these 1, 2 photographs. That's such a lovely description of those photos. I adore Kirsty's photography.

That was a beautiful story. I loved how you described Matthew's suffering, and of how believable the story was.

I like that in the end, everything works out for Matthew. His character deserved to be happy :)