If Only We Could Be Us - Comments

You are a great writer!!! I love this story. Very well developed and a great plot!!! Write mooooorrrreeeeee!!!! Please!! I want to readd!!! :) keep writing!

Dafuq? Whaddafuck? The fuck? WHAT THE FUCK? skldfrjkgjr cffrerasdjkatrhn akldjgkldfnmgka -STROKE- OMFG NOOOOOO. KITTY!!!!! RED!! SHANEEE! -DEAD- o____o

wait...... what O.O
i dont even know what just happened at the end there..... what @_@ omg up date soon so i can know wtf just went on xD ahhhhhh

Okay, I warn you about the swearing about to occur in this soon to be monstrous comment:

WHATTTT THEEEE FUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKK! WHO THE FUCK POSSESSED LIZA?! I THOUGHT SHE WAS NICE! I LIKED HER! I LIKED HER AND JACK TOGETHER! WHAT THE ACTUAL MOTHER FUCKING HIGH FUCK?! O____O
Okayyyy. My brain has just exploded and I am currently a zombie writing this comment because major shit just went DOWN.
Like, oh my god. I don't even know where to begin! MUNRO!
Oh jebus. Please please please please PLEASE don't make him hurt any more. Him and Shayne. God, I just want to hug 'em both and make them all alright!
And Red is amazing. That chick is one helleva character- I SHOT GUN HER AS MY BEST FRIEND!
I am going to kill somebody right now. I am sooooo freaked out and angry and sad and happy (because of your AMAZING UPDATE AND THE SEQUEL WHICH IS SOON TO COME!).
But yes. Right now, I am basically having a stroke/heart-attack/brain aneurysm.
Such an amazing story, and I cant wait for the sequel!
I NEED MORE OF THIS BECAUSE I DON'T THINK I WILL MAKE A SECOND WITHOUT KNOWING WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!
*brain explodes again*

OMG SHUT UP! WTF?????????????????? GAHHHHHH SHAYYYYYYYNE!!!!!!!! LIZZZA!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I commend you on the great story and I am literally shitting my pants in anticipation for the sequel! Sorry for my hyperness, but your story was just SO FUCKING GOOD AND SO FUCKING BAD AT THE SAME TIME. If you know what I mean by that. It's a good thing. If this was a book I'd throw it across the room, but since it's just a computer I guess I'm forced to type angrily. You can't see right now, but I'm slamming on my keys. Btw, everything I said was a compliment even if it didn't seem like one.

I really really really want to know what happened! I hope you guys update soon. (:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE UPDATE MORE! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!

Oh also can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel

I started reading this a few hours ago and fell in love with it. They need to get away from that place it's horrible and also um.....I think HU-74 is hydrogen uranium...I think and like you said the number really doesn't mean anything

Da fuck xD

SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! ^_^
And holy crap woman- who the hell did Munro make minced meat out of *freaks out*
PLEASE TELL ME IT WASN'T SHAYNE!!!! T_T I'm going to kill someone if it is. Please don't hurt Shayne. I don't want Munro to feel the guilt, I don't want anything bad to happen to those two babies.
This story has me in tears *gets out tissues* Please let the boys be okay!

Amazing story, and I'm looking forward to the sequel ;] It will definitely be AH-MAZING!
And I have no idea what HU-74 stands for... should I? lmao I'm never good at this guessing stuff.
But I really, REALLY need an update. And I need to know who Munro beat up (and it better not be Shayne T_T) AND I really, really need to know how you made this story to freaking awesome. :]

Holy shit, I want to cry! They have to escape, they just have to! :'(

OKAY, OKAY, TELL ME THE WHO THE BASTARD IS WHO WAS ALL TOUCHY TOUCHY WITH SHAYNE'S MUNRO?!?!?!?!?! *gets out rocket launcher and army tank* He's dead >:] MWAHAHAHHA
That was an awesome chapter, annoyed me (not in a bad way... in a way that makes me wanna protect your lovely boys... and girls haha I love them!) at times and made me want to reach in and grab out your boys, but sooooo amazing! So darn good, seriously!
Please update soon! The ending is just... GAHHHHH *freaks out* IS MUNRO GONNA HAVE TO FIGHT?!?!?! O.O I just had the image of Shayne and Munro fighting each other, but... but... T_T That would make me cry... but I really wanna know who's fighting. But pleaseeeee not Munro. That boy is just too precious to hurt *hugs Munro* He is the shizz!
Love it andwant need more!

I know where both of you live.
if anyone whom i like dies.
..SOMETHING will happen.
xD

Anyways. YAY UPDATE! xD

I wouldn't be pissed if you didn't write a sequel because that's up to you, but I would certainly love it! (: I'm seriously obsessed with this story and the characters, everything is so flawless. :)

OH MY GOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDD!!!!! O______O
YOU UPDATED MY DARLING, DARLING WRITER!
I was so happy when I saw you had updated, like, you have no idea hahahaha
And I don't mind if you don't make a sequel- I know it's hard to write a whole new story, if you get what I mean! So yeah, I'm not gonna be angry if you don't make one. DO WHAT YOUR HEART TELLS YOU haha
I loved the update, and... and... LOUIS' POV NEXT?! *fist pump* BRING IT ONNN!
xx

I'm so glad you finally updated! :D I would be pissed if you didn't make an update (:

I've re-read this story about 3 times waiting for an update. (: I freaking love this story. Munro and Shayne are so adorable. :)

Aww, they said they loved each other :]
And I absolutely love Jack- he is HILARIOUS!
Ooh ooh! And I am soooo hyped for the next chapters- it sounds intense! O.O
Please update soon! I neeeeed more!
p.s. Asher is still epic :P

loving the author's note xD
also
do i hear a BUM BUM BUM BUMMMMMMM? lol
update soon se vous plait.
i love how KITTY told his story
and "I love you"s! AWW! xD

kbyenow. xD