If Only We Could Be Us - Comments

This is really interesting :)
Shayne is epic! Hehe
So yahhh :)
Love it
<3

Damn, and I thought someone else would have commented already :[
Seriously, I am angry for you guys! You two deserve way more credit than you get!
Awh, Shayne is the sweetest, putting up with his disgust of vomit just so he could comfort little Munro :3 So cute.
And I'm excited for the fight between Munro and Mr Scary haha
I'll be rooting for Munro, of course!
Please update hastily- I will be waiting!
xx

Yay! Double updates! Woot woot!
God, I love you guys. Seriously, double updates and Shayne goodness. Delicious!
Shayne is, honestly, thrustastic, as you would probably put it ;] Sorry, I kinda like that word haha
I just love the idea of shifters- it's something you don't see on Mibba a lot, but a mixture of supernatural sexiness and hot slash? *Drool*
Please update quickly-- I'll be waitingpatiently ;]
xx

Okay, before I freak out in a really cliche fan-girl way, I just wanted to say, your story is AH-MAZING!
As in, I am so obsessed with it I'm checking my email every 5 minutes to see if you've updated. no joke.
And seriously, am I only the second commenter? That is crazy!
Your story is amazing and I love it to bits!
Munro is the cutest guy ever! I just want to hug him to bits! haha
And Shayne- oh, don't get me started!
He is sex on legs, I swear ;]
But seriously, I love your story, and *instantly subscribes*
Happy New Year!
xx Amber

I think you need to move te picture off of the writing because some of the words are extremely hard to read.