I'm here hoping that Xavier and Summer are now going to make up seeing as they're just had make up sex and everything. I really like them together. Sex scenes are okay if they're something to do with the story itself, like it's more about their connection and being close than just mindless, y'know?
Amazing update :) I love the last part of this chapter where Jimmy smiles because he believe there is still hope to win Summer over. Hopefully she will finally be able to listen to him.
I'm one of those (very few, probably) people who's glad you didn't write in the sex scene. I'm sick of the site being full of smut. One every now and then isn't bad, but it's always nice to find a writer who doesn't find them necessary. So I support it!
I'm on the new site, but I'm a little unsure of how I feel about it. Totally up to you if you join.
Anyway, I have stuff to do, but I had to read this when I realised it was up. =) Hope everything's okay on your end.
Wow. Have just read theatre prequel and this one and I have to say im hooked! The plot and The way youve developed it throughout The time has been great.
It's going to be a while for them to gain any trust from Summer and Jimmy believes they have no chance. But the others seem to believe they have a chance to getting Summer back. I can't wait for the next update!
I feel kinda bad for Jimmers. He obviously still cares about her and they all regret the way they treated her. I think if she gave them a chance she would be surprised with what they have to say.
I’m reeeeally sorry this is overdue, but I had some problems with the internet connection x--x gah, it completely blew my plans :c
Now, to the chapter: I loved this insight of Jimmy’s head. Throughout the sequel he’s been awfully quiet, always letting Matt speak for them and stuff… and now you finally gave us a clue of how he’s exactly feeling. And I have to say: my heart hurt while reading this. There was this tug in my chest just trying to feel all those emotions. It’s not just old love, rage, hate… there’s also this feeling of dread, resentfulness, sadness, regret. It has so many feelings jumbling together it becomes overwhelming. I’ve said it before and I keep my ground: Summer has the right to feel the way she does. What were they expecting? They could just pop out of nowhere and life would be perfect? It doesn’t work that way, although I keep wishing the fact that underneath she’s obviously fragile will make her give Jimmy at least a chance to talk. I understand Jimmy, though. He seemed quite scared of her, or, should I say, the things she would tell him. That end was horrible. Not because of your writing –no, it was perfect- but my heart really ache just because Jimmy is giving up and he truly believes she will never, ever, talk to him again. Which, if I’m honest, is exactly the feeling she gives away. Summer is trying too hard to distance herself. I’m quite afraid that will come back to bite her in the ass – pardon my French x) (I just realized how much I like long chapters :D) Overall, I absolutely loooved this, like I always do :D Everything you write is just so incredibly enjoyable! I could read this forever ^v^ Perfect, perfect, perfect! I hope you’ll be able to give me a chapter while still in Toronto :3
And this is a freaking huge comment O.O
(And I just realized another thing: that banner is fucking gorgeous O.O Okay, I thought that the first time I saw it, but I never really pointed that out. Perfect story deserves perfect layout after all :D)
I really hope that summer will talk to the guys eventually because they need to talk about what happened in high school. Poor jimmy he really doesn't want to lose summer but she told them she doesn't want anything to do with them. Amazing update :)
Ahh, I don't know whose side to be on!! I love Summer and Xavier and I think Jimmy and the guys suck for doing what the did. Buuuuut I adore Jimmy and his goofy self and after this chapter and seeing how sad he is without Summer... I think I'm on his side, lol. I feel for him because it's like taking one step forward before taking two steps back with Summer. Hopefully things can get worked out, though I'm not expecting anything over night for those two, lol. Great chapter and I can't wait for more!!!
No good going around to talk hyped up on anger because it'll always deflate, Summer. She does have a point, that if she had been desperate for answers to questions then she would have contacted them before, after all she has the means to contact them whenever she wants, but she didn't during the six years. I still gotta say good on Summer for standing up for herself against them and reminding them of what they did because it really isn't forgivable.
Update soon I love it Can't wait to find out what happens I wonder why the did all the mean things they did to her. She should talk to everyone, Xander, her dad and the guys... About everything