Sweetest Downfall - Comments

Finally getting around to this, my friend! Loved the prologue. Very Hunger Games-like. Though, I do have one... thing. Why is there a mockingjay pin in the banner, if this is so far before the mockingjay symbolized the revolution? Maybe it comes in to play later but right now, it seems out of place for the story. But off I go to read more! :)

It's really good! One or two typo mistakes here and there, but other wise, the grammar was excellant. :)
Hmmm, I've been debating on which team I'm on throughout the last 9 chapters, but I'm still not really sure. Maybe one the games start I'll be able to pick.
I love how this kinda has a similar, um, how to I word this, vibe(maybe) to the original story. It's almost like a prequel story, which I love, because you never really get to hear more about the former games in the first book.(Ive only been able to read the first, still waiting on the others) I also loved the two points of view from different districts, it gives more sides to the story and could Ben very interesting as the story goes on.
Update soon please?:)

Love this already :)

I really do adore this story already :3
Emilyn's character is my favorite, so far anywhoo.
Gaah, update soon por favor!!

Oh my goodness!!
THIS IS AMAZING and the layout is very pretty, lol.
Update soon please!
<3

This sounds lovely and the layout it very pretty.
Update soon please, I'd love to know what y'all have in store for this story!

Lovely layout :)