When the Sun Goes Down - Comments

I absolutely love how you structure your sentences, very profession and very refreshing to read! The layout isn't difficult to read too, plain and simple, just the way I like it. I love your writing style as well. Do be careful not to lean too much into the cliche storyline many fantasy stories carry. Your story has the potential to have great originality. I hope you do this story justice and complete it with great determination!

I'm excited to see what you will put up soon! Keep writing!

I absolutely love how you structure your sentences, very profession and very refreshing to read! The layout isn't difficult to read too, plain and simple, just the way I like it. I love your writing style as well. Do be careful not to lean too much into the cliche storyline many fantasy stories carry. Your story has the potential to have great originality. I hope you do this story justice and complete it with great determination!

I'm excited to see what you will put up soon! Keep writing!

Sorry if you get this twice but:First comment! Yay:) I'm here from comment swap
Tehehe.But I like the plot of this story,it's very original.Alot of people you can almost guess what's gonna happen,you can't in this one.I like how you added a bunch of different creatures and put them all into this one story.I could never do that

Fist comment! Yay:) Tehehe but I like the plot of this story,it's very original.Alot of people you can almost guess what's gonna happen,you can't in this one