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  • Sonshine.

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    @ Randomness1
    haha, actually yes I have! I learned about the paranoid-linux from that story, and I thought it was just too interesting to not put in this story, since they're hackers and all.
    December 11th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • Randomness1

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    I love this story. Its so creative and original, though I have to ask, ever read Little Brother? I spotted one or two references, and I really like that book. So, yeah. :)
    December 10th, 2012 at 08:04pm
  • Zeeke

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    I adore this story!! it's so well written and original, you're amazing. I'm so glad I had today off so I could finish reading it, and there is a sequal, yay!!
    August 25th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • ninja_wolf813

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    Omg Chobits!!! Lol Mr. Green
    June 21st, 2012 at 10:23am
  • sno.

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    To be honest, I haven't been into slash since... since a really long time ago when I was about fourteen. It isn't really my flavor, but you've managed to pull me into your story here. :] The whole idea is really interesting and I think the little doll sized robots are adorable. I'm still in the process of reading, but I'm looking forward to see how this develops! Once I'm finished here, I'll be sure to check out your sequel~ :]
    June 5th, 2012 at 07:41am
  • lilylion1

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    This is, in one word, amazing. I love it so much. SO SO SO MUCH. I do have a question, though. Was the idea of the districts and the capital and things of that sort inspired by The Hunger Games? Btdubs, I'm lovin' the sequel so far, too. <3
    March 10th, 2012 at 03:05pm
  • A T T A C K !

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    Awwww, that was so sweet :]
    I'm sad this is over, but there is a sequel, so I won't be moping for long!
    I love your characters- they all have so much heart and personality, and it makes them really real.
    Your plot and ideas are so interesting and very, very original, which is a huge plus! ^_^
    So please, PLEASE write the first chapter of I Come Alive soon! I'll be waiting, as always!
    xx
    March 5th, 2012 at 06:52am
  • Curbside_Confessions

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    I love Human After All and Im sad to see it end but I can't wait for the sequel. This is definately one of my favourites. It made me laugh, almost cry, hate you and love you at the same time when bad things happened to my favourite characters. I love how you like to make it seeem like one thing is going to happen but then the opposite does. Please start the sequel soon. PS I always thought there was something funny about that damn bird. Good writing.
    March 5th, 2012 at 03:52am
  • Skeleton_kitten1313

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    I almost cried cause it worried me that Joshua didn't remember Beau but he did! :' ) Has to be one of the best endings ever!
    That birdy is freaking me out though...
    I know that Beau's health is getting better sorta but it kinda worries me that he's taking these pills I know it's to help with pain or whatever but didn't the president give him those pills or something? I remeber something about the president giving him meds. Anyway its probably nothing but I hope it doesn't make his condition worse later on like he get some random illness and what not.Wow... is it normal to be this concerned... oh well! :)
    I can't wait for the sequel to start now! :D

    PS~ I love your writing! I feel like I've said this a lot already but now I'm saying it again! :)
    March 4th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • Sucks For You

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    You made me cry!
    But it's okay, because they were mostly tears of joy.
    Except when Joshua first woke up and I thought he didn't remember Beau.
    At that point there were tears of sadness.
    But they're together! And alive! And I'm so freaking happy right now.
    I think I may be a bit more attached to these Chracters than what is considered healthy. O_<
    ILY Sonshine.! ♥ Can't wait for the sequel to start.
    March 4th, 2012 at 07:24pm
  • A S K I N G .

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    Omg! I love the ending with Joshua and Beau being all cute a cuddly<3 So fluffy! :D
    You and you're sneakyness man D:< WHAT IS THE BIRD GOING TO DO??
    So are they going to like find the missing robots in the sequel, hm? O: And that bird is like a robot controlled by some evil guy who has those robots? Or or! Maybe it's Mr.Rager. Wait maybe that guy works for as a secret spy or something for President Gile and like the government really is corrupt. x.x
    Sonshine, this story was awesome! And it's unexpected twist and turns were so surprising but good. I love your style of writing <3
    And I know I'm going to love the sequel just the same :)
    March 4th, 2012 at 05:12pm
  • ibeelauren

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    This story was so cute! I adored every part of it :) I seriously was about to cry when Joshua woke up and didn't immediately remember everything. Fantastic job, can't wait to read the sequel!
    March 4th, 2012 at 04:30pm
  • PineappleScream275

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    Your story was an amazing reading experience!
    You got me empathising with your characters, especially Beau and Joshua (they're adorable together btw <3). And this was written well and with thought and a real plot, unlike some others I've read. It shows how much you have put your mind in it.
    Can't wait for the sequel! :) *goes to subscribe to it*
    March 4th, 2012 at 02:54pm
  • herpy berpy.

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    Oh god. You had me scared then, when Joshua was like 'who're you' to Beau. But seriously, it was a great ending.
    It's sad to see this go, but I'm glad that you're doing a sequel.
    March 4th, 2012 at 10:17am
  • Firetouch22

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    I really love the idea of the story. it's extreamly origanol, and just really awsome!
    March 2nd, 2012 at 02:32pm
  • MissEL19

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    Loving this story :3
    March 2nd, 2012 at 06:44am
  • Skeleton_kitten1313

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    Can't wait for the next chapter! I need to know what's gonna happen to Beau when he sees Joshua again!
    Also, Drew?!?! What's going on with you? :)
    March 1st, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • Sucks For You

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    Whyyy?!?!?! Why do you do this to me?!
    I need to know if Joshua remembers Beau!
    Also, I think this is defintiely a wtf moment.
    Where the hell did Drew come from?!
    And where is he going?!
    and why won't he talk to Beau?!
    So many question!!!
    I can't wait for the next chapter.
    ILY Sonshine.! ♥
    March 1st, 2012 at 06:52pm
  • A T T A C K !

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    Drew... o.O What's up with him?
    AND JOSHUA IS OOHHHKAYYY! Well, I think he's okay...
    I have an inkling that there may be a tiny memory issue, but as long as he is safe and sound I think I can be somewhat content :]
    I was super glad to hear that there would be another chapter, PLUS the sequel! Woohoo! More story awesomeness for me! ^_^
    Update soon, okay? You are an amazing writer!
    xx
    March 1st, 2012 at 11:01am
  • Ktulu

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    oh, sweet baby jesus! you and your cliffhangers are going to be the death of me, lol. there are just so many twists and turns that collide in the most delicious ways. this story is very unique and amazing but I'm really interested in how this story ends, which is a shame that it has to, but what do ya do?
    March 1st, 2012 at 09:41am