Omg Pete died....thn he came back to life holy shit he is a tucking immortal thts cool, anyhoo I think tht if the guys explained what happen to them may e they would understand idk, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS? i mean, its really good and I kinda know what's next, but still. Its been 3 months... I hope that you didn't abandon it or anything... :(
Love it, the guys told William what happened to his co worker, tht crazy old lady was in the forest with a gun and tried to shoot Patrick but Pete took the bullet for him and I thought tht was a sad moment becuz Pete could possibly die can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Ooh this chapter was good! They told William about what they did, Patrick and Pete were unwillingly coming to terms with their feelings, and that old woman came back with a gun! Pete took the shot for him But yeah, I'm a fan of the show Misfits so I know what's going to happen lol Update soon?
another thing: don't listen to that guy/girl who said the chapters are too long. i love lengthy chapters because more things happen in them and the story develops more without being cut up. so carry on writing long chapters - the longer the better! ^^
another thing: don't listen to that guy/girl who said the chapters are too long. i love lengthy chapters because more things happen in them and the story develops more without being cut up. so carry on writing long chapters - the longer the better! ^^
hi, i'm new to mibba and the only reason i came on here at all was to read the ryden n_n but yeah, i can say this one's the best i've read on here, and it'd be awesome if you updated it soon. btw every chapter made me laugh out loud. :D and oh, this is the best superpowers!AU i've ever read ^^