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  • bublbabie

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    I am so glad yo updated. I can't wait to see what happens when the day he died comes
    June 11th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    AHHHH!!!! What happened?!!?!?! They were so happy! What happened to change that!?!??! Well anyway... I loved the first story and can't wait for this one as well! :-) <3
    May 29th, 2012 at 08:49am
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    AHHHH!!!! What happened?!!?!?! They were so happy! What happened to change that!?!??! Well anyway... I loved the first story and can't wait for this one as well! :-) <3
    May 29th, 2012 at 08:48am
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh, the start! Love it!
    May 29th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh, the start! Love it!
    May 29th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • Colby_Armstrong9

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    Perfect start! Amazing start! Ahhh!! Like I can't even tell you how much I love it already. No offense to happy couples, but they piss me off. I don't believe anyone is that exceededly happy and cute all the time. I'm glad this story brings to life the back story behind a seemingly perfect and well meshed couple. I really really like this beginning. I was expecting them to arrive in Montreal with their happy attitude boy was I wrong. I absolutely love the tone of this first chapter. It's like even though they love each other and are perfect for each other, they still have to work for their relationship. I like that theme whether it was a conscious or unconscious decision. I think it really fits their situation well. I also love how you always describe Kris' eyes. I think that really helps me know that he still cares even when he is angry or sad because you describe so much emotion in them. I think yours is pretty much the only story I can actually see the famous person in my mind and picture it while I read and it because of those descriptions. I don't know why, but it just brings the character to life and I think it is really great. I am already addicted! Awesome job!
    May 27th, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • leolion1234

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    I can't wait for the next chapter! Smile
    May 27th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • NMT82

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    Great start. Can't wait to find out what happened
    May 26th, 2012 at 03:56pm
  • Ali.58

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    hope, they will have happy ending :)
    May 26th, 2012 at 03:04pm
  • hockeychick37

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    they gotta stay 2gether cuz ive spent ALL nite reading the prequel and they are too cute 2 NOT stay 2gether...UPDATE SOON!!!
    May 26th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • mnkoivuchick81

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    Loved the prequel, hoping Sophia & Kris have a happy ending! Keep up the great work!
    May 26th, 2012 at 03:52am
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    I just finished reading the prequel and then found this. You're a great writer!
    May 25th, 2012 at 01:46am
  • bublbabie

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    excited about the sequel. A little confused with the first chapter but you said it was for further in the story so I guess i will have to wait a little bit to be unconfused. Love it so far though
    May 24th, 2012 at 10:34pm
  • RebaXBroda

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    This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter:)
    May 24th, 2012 at 10:04pm
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