The Sweetest Dream Will Never Do - Comments

@ AnaShadows
Ok I get I so it's not a flashback but it's like the tension point, Gotcha!
Can't wait for the sequel

Love the chapter can't believe tht was the last chapter but I'm excited for this sequel, can't wait to read the sequel :)

@ bxgurl95
Hi ya! I wanted to explain the sections! I wrote that part in the beginning to kinda draw you into the chapter and make you realize this was an intense one. When I got to that point of the story, i didn't know what to write to make you realize that. It's kinda like in a movie where there show you something big as a preview to draw you in, but when it comes to that part, they don't cut it off. They just replay it.
This was the final chapter though! Sequel is something I'm working on though!

Ok that was a nice surprise having such a long update. I really liked how chapter, the tension between Edward and Savannah has reached a volatile point and it gives a different dynamic to the story. I love that she's coming to terms with how she feels about Jacob and that he is accepting if it and also that her family isn't judging her for it. I hate Jane and Bella lol. I'm not sure necessarily where I want Savannah to I just want her relationship owing Jacob to progress definitely.
Did you know that the first section and the last section are the same? (The section before the fighting and running away is repeated in the beginning and leads into the cliffhanger at the end) so I was a little confused as to why I was reading the same thing twice.
Update again soon! SEQUEL YAY!

Please update soon!!

Update!!! Can't wait for more! :)

Wow! I like it! I hope you update soon! And I love her powers :D

Jacob u r some kind of stupid....u have an imprint and u thought tht Bella wanted u, really -.- can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Why would he kiss her if he imprinted -_-

I definitely think that this story needs to be a bit longer because I'm not sure where the direction is right now. That's not a critique it's just me saying that I want more to unfold. A cliffhanger ending into a sequel not be nice. I personally really want her to be in Jacob more and ignoring his message is not cool lol. Maybe this story ends with a rantic scene between Savannah and Jacob? (Later on of course) I'm not sure just shooting ideals. I'm also really curious to find out what happened that they're not telling her ... Update soon if you can !
(ps. You're teachers blows)

Love it, hmm y is she ignoring Jacob now maybe it's becuz he is keepin a secret from her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Cliffhangers are known to kill, *shrug* just saying
And does she have a thing for Jacob?? I hope so, maybe he told them he imprinted idk maybe it is the kiss

Love it, umm is the secret tht Jacob kissed Bella, anyhoo great chapter dearie can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Puhleeasee update sooon!!!

Omg lady where have u been, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Omg your back plz keep typing don't stop!!!:,D

That's crazy I wonder if that's something she can turn off and on. She has kinda lost Edward and he doesnt want to admit it. The start of a Wolf/Vamp romance sounds interesting ;)
Can't wait for the next update

I lovee it. Please, update soon. (:

Update plz this is so good I want to know I need to know what happens update plz

Update soon!