Wow, I love this story! I usually stick to slash fanficition but I have to say this has really hooked me.
I'm having a lot of suicide-related thoughts at the moment so, I don't know, I guess it's nice to read stuff about it. And this is really well written, too. (I only read non-slash stuff if it's original, the story hooks me and it's well written, and this is all 3 of them :3)
Love it so far. Such a different style for you (I think, well...from what I've read) and it's really entertaining. Interested to see where it goes. And like the first commenter, I found your beginning fantastic. Hooked right from the start. The tone was just perfect <3 Anyway, looking forward to more. (Will reply to your massive comment later...haha)
Wowza dude. I hate how good you are haha jk. Is it bad that I've been home for quite the time, but I'm still wearing my winter coat? Ah anyway, Love and you shall have to help me with a layout! <3 update soon mi'love
I took Latin for three years, and I have to say, I'm a GIANT fan of the beginning. I adore your writing and I love the sarcasm and joking of the mysterious Prince Charming... I'm really excited for this story and I'll be reading every chapter and commenting on every chapter unless I don't have time.
P.S. Hooray for awesome self made layouts! It's really good and I really love the picture at the top. The banner? Either way, it's beautiful :D