Closure - Comments

NO POST AGAIN I MUST HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! SHE'S FINALLY LEAVING I MIST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Okay now that I'm done yelling I crack up laughing every time I think of the story so now you're not a terrible person or maybe I am too.

Idk they seemed to he getting along really well and she even said i love u back....

my friend had a duckling she fed it a burrito and it died. i will never forget that day angela was taking a bath and the duck started having a seizure or something i yelled to her that the duck was dying she came running out of the bath dripping water every where naked might i add and tried to give the duck cpr and then started yelling for me to get a straw to shove down the ducks throat so it would get more air... i guess it was one of those moments you have to be there for it doesn't seem so funny when i write it out

great chapter i wonder why she is just now wondering how long she's been there for

Duh the over i meant is this now a Marti story?

Does this mean her and Ronnie are over? They make a cute couple though...

Aww I loved the last two chapters can't wait to read some more. My mommy has three horses red, pawpaw, and lone star & once upon a time I had a chicken he lived in my garage and front yard. I found out why the chicken crossed the road ... to get away from the fat kid on the bicycle

I love Marti's mom....she's so sweet
Why don't you like summer vaction?

5 miles! wow i would passed out
loved the update

5 miles! wow i would passed out
loved the update

I gave you a thumbs up ... woot woot lol. Love the story & can't wait for more!

I'm sorry about your ipod getting taken away. Sucks that you wont get to update much cause I love the story. I hope to read some more soon!

dun dun dun ... dude i bet Ronnie is about to flip the fuck out ... Can't wait for another update

I have a feeling that shit is going to hit the fan when she gets back all because she left her phone. It would be amazing if you'd just skip to there and not go into detail about the tour.

But she just got back to Vegas..well hopefully this goes well...im glad Marti is back in the picture

Took a while to read the first one then get caught up on this...i love this so far
She needs to talk to Ronnie. She's hurting him and herself

Dude he was going to hit Jacky ... she needs to just talk to him it sucks having no closure & not know why things went the way the did

Why do I have a feeling Ronnie is going to show up at Dakota's house. Can't wait to read more!

Aww I hope she gets to talk to Marti! I feel bad that she hung up on Ronnie, but that was sneaky of him to call from Jacky's phone.

Aww Nason has a girlfriend now. I really want Ronnie to go talk to Oli and I can't believe Stina is just so calm about the whole thing. I'd be dragging her ass back home kicking and screaming. Can't wait for more!

Okay so I found this story today I read the prequel and all of this ... I was disappointed when i finished this chapter and there were no more for me to read i literally said out loud "this is bullshit!" which was kind of hard to do because I myself am sick lol I absolutely adore this story I am in love. You are a great story teller I found myself so engrossed in the story. I literally teared up at the end of the last story when she said goodbye to her cousin. I can't believe she is just leaving like that she's suffering some major inner turmoil/ psychiatric issues. I feel bad for Ronnie and the rest of her friends. I bet Jacky hates not being able to tell anyone what he knows. I personally would blab my ass off, but I mean if she believes this will make her happy then why should he stop her. Okay I'm going to stop now I seem to be rambling. Can't wait to read more sweetie!