Thank you for all the comments, it seems as though a lot of people are enjoying my story. My apologies for the long break, I'm going to have a reread of it, correct all of my grammatical errors and try my very best to continue.
I LOVE this and honestly, I've only read the first three paragraphs. I love your writing style and the plot of this story. You have this special flow to your words. I'm off to read more.
Wow now things are getting very interesting! So Zacky is teaching her things a lot of things about a dom/sub relationship and so far she is doing great. I love to see her and Zacky start something serious with one another. I look forward to the next update!
So Lee dated Zacky for a bit???? I am so glad that you update and I apologize for commenting sooner! I get the feeling that both Zacky and Kate are growing closer and their feelings for each growing! Because Kate felt so jealous when she learned that Lee was more than sexual involved with Zacky. She had a relationship with him. I can't wait for the next update!
This is a very very different story I love it. It's constructed differently as well as the fact that it not your stereotypical fan fic which is bonus points in my book really. I do enjoy reading it. So keep up the good work and I look forward to more of this tale.
Its so cute how she was jealous about Zacky! James is a crafty guy but I think he has her interests at heart. I love her and Zacky and I cant wait to see if their going to end up staying at his house. ((: