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I adore this story I love how Kate really cant say no

Pleaaase Pleeeasse Update.

Pleaaase Pleeeasse Update.

I threw a huge fit when I got to the end of the chapter. I love this story. Please do not leave me hanging! It's so fluid and organic. I mean, I like a good bdsm-sold to the mob boss a7x stories, but this is so fresh!

I love this, it's unique and awesome, I can't wait for more!

I love your writing style and this story is so unique! Please continue and update again soon!

I was so very disappointed when I saw I'd read everything so far. Your writing is such a joy to read and I can't wait for another update. Beautiful style and your character development is very good. I'm subscribed and eagerly awaiting the next installment. :D

So Zacky knows that she is very submissive person, she couldn't say no to James when he offered her coffee and she kept drinking it even though it was making her sick to her stomach.
I take it that James was showing Zacky that she is a natural submissive and she needs a mentor to help her since she obviously say no to pretty much anyone.
And James doesn't want her to end up like some other natural submissive that ended up in the hospital with serious injuries.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, i'm totally and completely in love with this story.
i have like sooooo many questions!

i've been trying to find a story like this, and low and behold you updated yours!
i'm totally subscribed and i really hope you continue!:)

Wow so she is really a submissive, the kind of person that can say no to anyone because she doesn't want to disappoint them in some way.
And James seems to be very surprise about how she is a natural sub since she can't turn away anyone that comes to her door either advertising or selling things.
What's more she is texting Zacky too!
I wonder when things will start to heat up!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm impressed so far. Wonderful start to the story, drew me right in. I love the main character. Can't wait for more!

I love the second chapter!
Especially how Zacky and her hit it off pretty well!
I love the way this chapter went and how descriptive you are with each chapter!
I definitely can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't say I've read many fics like this, but that's what drew me in. I like the different characters you've given us so far, and I can't wait to read more!

I am loving this already!
I can't wait for the next update and I hope you do keep this story!
And the way you describe the whole relationship between the dom and sub is just very WOW!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!