Why did Anna just leave John? Their past relationship is so messed up. I love how Dani and John keep getting closer but I feel as if something big is going to happen that will tear them apart.
This is amazing! I really love the connection between Anna and John - chapter six (I think!) is my favourite so far! I absolutely adore the level of description you put into your writing! It really helps with setting the scene and makes the view of the characters more rounded in my opinion! Can't wait for more :) xx
This is honestly my favourite story on Mibba. Your writing style is so beautiful and flows quite smoothly. Needless to say, I dig it. Anna reminds me, of, well, myself. I'm rooting for Dani and John, however fucked up their relationship may be. I think it's the only way they can both get past Anna's death.
I was surprised that Dani and John were as calm as they were about the fact that they slept together. I really like their relationship. Dani seems better for John than Anna...I know Dani is Anna's sister and that whole situation is effed up but I really like Dani and John together. Also, John's last line broke my heart.
i just started reading this story tonight and you're an amazing writer. i hope you stick with this one because it's really good so updates soon pls haha :-)
This whole story is absolutely beautiful and it made me cry in the second chapter! I hope you plan on updating it again soon because you can't do a cliff hanger like that! Haha. This really is great and I can't wait for what's next.
This chapter is beautiful, you are an amazing writer. I'm dying from this cliff-hanger already and it's only been five minutes! So keep up the writing!
It flows so wonderfully! It's a really incredible story so far!! I finished your 4 chapters the night I found your story. Stayed up until 1 am but so worth it! I'm so excited to know what happened between Dani and John! Update soon?
It seems like John and Dani are getting closer. I'm sure this will cause some drama. I just want to find out what happened to Anna and what happened between Danielle and Kennedy!
I like this so much, honestly. The scene with Kenny was so cute, I was smiling the whole time. Although Dani and John are pretty cute too. I can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon?