Love Ain't Suppose To Hurt . - Comments

I have writers block but I have a chapter typed up but its like something is missing.

My bad for da spelling!! Dis danm touchscreen smart phone...

Now.....what happens next?? I wanna knw. I cnt wait into they make urban fiction a geren on hete..

I didn't really understand this sentence in the first paragraph, "In you ask why do I deal with the shit because I love him. " I think you just messed something up.

I didn't really like that you had two introduction chapters, and I didn't like the second chapter. I'd rather see you show these facts than just tell them to the reader. It would make for a stronger story. But, I think you have a good concept and I'd like to see you keep writing this and working on it!