Night of the Hunter - Comments

Is this fic dead? Because I liked it a lot.

Is this fic dead? Because I liked it a lot.

Are her and Jared connected? Oh my.

Tomo is shady, can't wait till the next chapter. Actually I can, lol I'm just hoping it comes soon.

I really like this update :)

WHAT. A Jared Leto story? I don't see too many Jared stories out there, so I definitely would like to read more of this. Update soon!

This is a really cool concept. It's really interesting. I can't wait for more.

The first chapter is pretty bland up until the scene with the bird. The lack of dialogue makes me think Christian is mute which is cool. I can't take a guy named Shannon seriously. I know a man named Shannon and it's just too funny, that and a man named Stacey. Too girly for my liking but whatevs. I like your descriptions a lot.

The second chapter was a lot better for me. Like, I can just read it so much easier and the description gets even better here. The old woman made me laugh 'cause she hissed. I could imagine an old crazy woman in a cloak running around acting crazy. Ah, who's the third meal from? I must know.

The third chapter was freaking crazy. I would be terrified it a winged man was chasing me like an owl chases a mouse. Excuse my language but fuck that I'd be crying in a corner and I would never ever get out of that corner. That was crazy intense and you wrote it well. I liked it a lot.

When I started to read this, I honestly didn't think that I was going to like this. But I freaking love it! I'm not into band fiction or whatever, and I'm glad this isn't fan girl meets hot singer/guitar player.

This is really different to me. I've never read an angel story before and you have a lot of unique ideas in this.

It's pretty awesome. I can't wait for an update!

What a creepy beginning.
Could there be a way for you to clue us in that Christian's a girl from the very beginning? Because I was picturing a guy until the second chapter and it's a bit disorienting.
I like the mysterious air this story has.
I'm glad Christian wrote a letter about wanting to know everything instead of snooping around like what I expected she would do.
That was... strange. Definitely unexpected that he drinks tears. Haha.
This was a fun read so far and I think it's good!

Oh geez :)

Golly. Your description of him in this chapter made me feel all tingly. xD

Hawt. Hawt. Hawt!!!! xD I want to be Christian. I really do!

Great update! <3

When he told Christian she was a queen, I awe'd and acted happy for her.
I know, I'm weird. I can't help it.
Please update soon (:

This story sort of left me speechless. I've never read anything like this before. I think it's amazing. I cannot wait for the story to unfold!

This was such an interesting chapter! Very original ideas in this one, there was! :D

Jared. *sighs* I love you so!! Take me with you!

Woow xD Jared, you can drink my tears any time!

Wow. This had a sort of humor in it that was wonderfully played~. But, omigod, omigod. That was awesome. Third chapter only, but that was awesome. The writing was simple and wonderful. It flowed really well and keeps the read's attention. Fuuuu. Jared. Ha, ha. Me like. xD Anyway, this was really wonderful. Of what I read, I'm really liking you're idea. It's awesome~! <3

This is so similar to Jane Eyre! Except he was hiding his wife, not his brother xD

Anyway, I'm feeling semi-better. Enough to read a few stories...but anyway. Sleep now.

I AM GOING TO COMMENT ONLY ON CHAPTER TWO RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO RUIN THE SURPRISE OF CHAPTER THREE

gahh you killed me. I am dead. When he tells her to deliver it to the door of the room she isn't allowed in and she hears footsteps.
SHE WAS SO CLOSE TO JARED I WAS DYING.
LIKE B*TCH TURN YOUR A** AROUND AND LOOK HIS BEAUTIFULNESS IN THE EYEBALLS.
ugh ugh ugh. So pretty.

I kind of thought the candied was trying to holler because his character seemed cute but I say nay! This is a Jared Leto story. Not a cute cashier story.

"Whispers of angels, miss."
WHISPERS OF ANGELS
I CAN JUST OICTURE JARED SINGING THAT AND DYING.
one of the most gorgeous sentences ever. It just flows so perfectly and sounds like the most beautiful thing in the world. Like you have to be something special to hear the whispers of angels. God I just love it so much.

SHE'S ABOUT TO MEET ANGEL FACE I AM D Y I N G
DO YOU REALISE HOW MUCH IT'S KILLING ME TO FINISH THE CHAPTER TWO COMMENT AND NOT SNEAK A PEAK AT THREE?!
srsly.
I bet his scream was the most beautiful scream ever since, ya know, he's a freaking angel.
You know fat hoar gon' cry doe.
I would. At his beauty. Not because I'm afraid though. ;_;
AHHH SO EXCITED FOR CHAPTER THREEEE! ok brb gonna go read it nao.

CHAPTER THREE COMMENT:
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He eats tears? WTF?
THAT
IS SO

HAWT. OMFG.

WAHHHHH. GOD. I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIS BEAUTIFUL BOD IN THAT ROOM.
THIS DUMB B*TCH HAD THE NERVE TO CRY
HAIL NAW.
then again she did meet the beautiful JARED.
AND HE HAS A FAVOR TO ASK OF HER.

love this.

OMG!!!!!! This was a fabulous chapter!! It was, it was, it was!!! I'm just...*blows up from story's awesomeness*

Jared is just too much. Ohmygosh.
I love this. haha (: