February 3rd, 2012 at 03:48am
MORE UPDATES, YEAAAAAH~
Okay okay okay so Shannon really freaks the eff out of me. Not joking. I picture him as an old guy with super pale skin and a hook nose and a top hat and a waist coat and I know he doesn't work in a morgue and I know you said he wore "day clothes" but HE. IS. FREAKY.
Now that that's out of my system, WHAAAAT. Don't cry? The hell, bro?! Shannon, you're not winning points here; you may be taking her up to see your creepy frankenstein experiment but you sure as hell aren't getting any closer to the "normal" end of the spectrum when you pull shit like that. I don't care if you're putting your trust in her. It's not sincere. It's spooky. And quite frankly, this reader doesn't appreciate your bluntness. SPARE ME, OKAY.
And secondly, the old bag lady was SO weird. The angels thing and all that, "why, there's even one on your shoulder!" No bitch no! Stop saying freaky shit! The girl can't talk, for Christ's sake; she's stuck in a house with a creepy old dude with a girl's name; the least you could do would be cut the crazy shit out for an hour or two while this girl innocently peruses the store. Ugh. I was shivering all over when she showed up.
IS JARED AN ANGEL IN THIS? CAN HE BE? PLEASE? He's already an angel in real life. You can't make him a non-angel.
Well, you clearly have to update again now. You've left too many strings hanging and now have unsatisfied readers. Chop, chop!
I WANT TO SEE JARED AND THE LAST CHAPTER WAS CLIFFHANGERR.WHY.