The Day the Music was Born - Comments

  • ThisKidNate.

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    Sorry we haven't updated, Kayla's got a bunch of other stories, and since we broke up, I lost my muse.

    But if we can continue to be civil, we can try to finish it, or continue.

    And if I ever feel creative, I'll add to it.
    January 24th, 2013 at 01:11pm
  • Little Robyn;

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    It didn't even occur to me that they weren't in school much. It just slipped my mind, ya know? I'm glad that Maria's dad is letting her move int, but I'm kinda bummed that he's got stomach cancer.
    March 26th, 2012 at 09:17pm
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    Yay ^_^
    March 26th, 2012 at 06:34am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    A boy nd a house how excitin : )
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • Little Robyn;

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    Makes sense to me lol
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • ThisKidNate.

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    He is me.
    If that makes sense.
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • Little Robyn;

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    Oh posh. Don't worry about it :) If you're not inspired to write, then it just doesn't work. She might have been more inspired that you were. Who knows! BTW, you're a great writer, if you haven't heard that before. It's very personable and very real, you know?
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • ThisKidNate.

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    I was lazy.
    I hate that she's written more, because I'm not as creative xD
    March 15th, 2012 at 03:51am
  • Little Robyn;

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    *le sigh* I really do like this story. I'm glad ya'll are back!

    I swear, I'm not form the south.
    March 15th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    The moment sam nd maria shared was soooo cute! ; ) I wuld do a co write but Im in the middle of three lol
    March 2nd, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • Little Robyn;

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    Hm....name him...Geoffrey. Because that's an awesome name ^_^ or Zeke. That's a cool name too.

    As for the cowrie, I'm sure we can figure something out ;) hint hint, of course! I'd love to!
    March 2nd, 2012 at 07:02am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Aww what's wrong with maria? nd I wanted know how they're gonna celebrate he return home, update soon!
    March 1st, 2012 at 06:20pm
  • ThisKidNate.

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    Reader interaction!
    name the kid!!!
    March 1st, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • Little Robyn;

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    Heh good job ^_^ I love that...Kenji and Alexis are making Sam the godfather of their kid ^_^
    March 1st, 2012 at 03:31pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    I think she culd have taken him but im glad he stepped in any way lol update again!
    February 21st, 2012 at 06:21am
  • Little Robyn;

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    You two are hilarious xDD As hilarious as a drunk hippo. And that's pretty funny.

    Anyway, I think towards the end of the chapter, it seemed a teensy bit forced. More natural, perhaps.
    February 21st, 2012 at 06:15am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Aww alexis is preggo but kyle is back lol update again i need to what's about to go down
    February 19th, 2012 at 05:38pm
  • carry.me.home.

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    Shuuusssh.
    :xxxx

    Hi. I'm Nate and I'm a sweet talker.
    February 19th, 2012 at 08:01am
  • ThisKidNate.

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    It's Kayla :b when I had writer's block, I hadn't seen her for a while, so she's my muse ;D
    February 19th, 2012 at 07:31am
  • Little Robyn;

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    I don't mind your short jumbled chapters. Their kind of nice, compared to longer, harder to read chapters. Kudos to you, dude.

    Also, find your muse. Find her!!! Because I'm assuming your muse is a girl...that's beside the point. I seriously love this story :) I'm happy for Alexis.
    February 19th, 2012 at 06:58am