The Day the Music was Born - Comments

Well sexual content never hurt lol nd Maria was cute

I'm glad you've decided to keep this story :D

AND FYI, I DON'T READ IT FOR THE SEXEH TIMES :D xDD

;D
Thank you.
I've decided to keep this story. :b

Congratulations on the nine month, but gosh I hate V-day...

I don't know if I'm gonna keep writing to this. I absolutely hate everything I write and I don't have a clue on what to write next.

I'm very entertained myself lol

xDD Seriously entertained too.

xDD Seriously entertained too.

I'll fix it then! Cheezus.

Page claim!

um...what I don't understand is why he would black out after one kick in the ribs? Unless Kyle was wearing...freaking steal toed boots 0_o Because I've been kicked in the ribs and I didn't black out. Perhaps specify that Kyle has massively strong legs?

Baha I see this average dude with GIANT legs...like massively muscular legs that are hugely out of proportion to the rest of his body....

Anyway, it was good :)

That was hot and very inspirational for me and my next chapter in my co-write lol

I still love this... and the new layout is awesome :D

Baha. This leaves me with some fun xD

weeeeell then. You two are pretty rad peeps ^_^ Anyway...wait for it....wait for it....wait for it..

;)

poor sam, I hope he gets better

We made them, us in a way.

I'm glad I made you smile, Kayla :) The thing is *here I go into relationship rant mode xDD* you'll never be able to say what you want. It's all your actions, honey. Telling him you love him is fine and dandy, especially if you mean it. But sometimes those words lose their meanings, you know? Show him you love him :)

As for you, sir Nate. I'll read anything you two put out to write. You're both really dynamite writers. You work really well together and it's really fun to read. Honestly, it's a great story. It should have more readers :)

As for the characters, I love them ^_^ Sam because I relate to him. Maria because she's headstrong and kick butt. Allistair because he's pretty chill. I loved when he was talking to himself and he's all like "I screwed this up. Crap." It's pretty rad.

Anyway. I'm done spamming your comment page with my useless relationship advice that I can't even follow, my incoherent advice on the characters, and whatever else there was up there. I'm dead tired.

Bye bye now! :D

I'll try :b

Alistair hands down, and Maria gonna have to take a chance with him but I understand how she feels. Update soon ; )