I Wish I Could Be The One. - Comments

Like I said before Mibba had that error:

I love Little Eddie, don't get me wrong, the big-older Eddie from the originals was, and is, still great, but I really like Little Eddie. He's cute and funny, smart yet childish, and is protective of his BIG sister. And he doesn't let the fact that he's the little brother phase him. Also, I like-love-how he closes his eyes and counts when he's scared or angry, it's A LOT better than what I do..by far. Actually, since I first read that he does that, I've actually tried it..and it somewhat works for me, but I still end up lashing out on something later on. Anyways! I kind of like how Berkley chases Zacky and tries to bite his head off all the time, it's funny haha I still can't read the part where Zacky's yelling at Kassidey and admits that he loves Britain without smiling. I just-can't. I smile, I think it's kind of adorable to be honest.

Kassidey is such a bitch to her own sister and she is a year younger than Britain sooo I don't get how she is able to talk shit to her older sister like tht and not get her ass kicked like Kassidey couldnt have been my sister becuz she would know tht I am the boss of her other than my parents sooo yea so I'm glad tht Zacky told Kassidey off becuz she needed to hear the truth.....also I think Britain needs to gain a little back bone and stand up for herself at least becuz I don't like it tht she is being bullied by Tyler who is a complete douchebag, and he'd baby sister sooo yea......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I HATE that Mibba erased stuff people posted!

Anyways, I don't like how Kassidey's such a bitch. But I hope Val punched her hard, if she punched her. I also like Val's nickname for Britain! haha Britty-Kitty, it kind of sounds like Pretty Kitty haha (like Jimmy, I'm a child at heart. don't judge)

Update soon. Please.

Amazing fight scenes nd poor Britian but Tyler really is a duche bag!!

Author's Note: Yes I love that chapter! How could I not?

I love Zacky's smartass remarks and how he always makes Britain laugh, it's awesome

What can I say? I wanted to be the first comment.

I think that that first chapter was great. I like knowing back stories, and this one with Zacky and Britain seems to be awesome so far.

By the way, I love the "black hearted bastard" part, I've never heard that one before. I've only heard things similar

I'm so excited for this!