Your Guardian Angel - Comments

Ah I love this story! You might not update this story anymore but it was amazing!

I love this. It was great!

Well well well....I'm glad this story is back :) I missed it!

loveloveLOVE!

Hey the begining was great! Dante certainly creeps the hell out of me! But why would Natasha say that in front of him! He has powers obviously! Id be scared shitless and just keep my mouth shut! But that's just me haha. In one of the paragraphs you put Eliza instead of Natasha.

THe beginning was really good, but a little editing is needed, I think. Great job :)

I love this :) anyway do they have to turn her to there side or just have to keep her? I ask because if its turning her to their side Dante is doing a shitty job.... just saying :P but I agree I didn't care for the start of the chapter, but I do like the ending :)

I've been an awful commenter and editor, forgive me. I've been super stressed and irritable so I haven't bee able to carefully read the chapters, but I loved this one :) great job! I loved the emotion in the last half of the chapter. Well done.

Caleb! Noo!

I really love this story! And feelings arise :)

I love this :) thanks for the update! Though, when I should be resting, my parents are going to make me go to school...eew....

I loved the date with Justin because Caleb was being a prick. I think you're going in a good direction with this. This is such an awesome story especially the original storyline

Caleb watched from the bed as she walked to her chest of drawers, pulled out a pair of socks, and walk back to the chair in front of her vanity.- and watched her walk back to the chair in front of her vanity.

I love how Caleb is completely an ass when she's with Justin xDD Great job!

MORE! :D :D I love it!

She had removed her t-shirt the previous night when Caleb had gone to the guest room, feeling more comfortable in her sports bra and shorts- should be "from the previous night when Caleb blah blah blah.

His smile was warm as well, as he turned towards the couple walking towards them. You don't need that comma, I don't think. Only if you add an "and" in there and another phrase.

“We use storms to cover up the fighting that’s going on,” Isabel clarified. “If there’s a fight closer to earth than we want it to be, we bring clouds in to cover it up. Thunder signifies a hit, the lightning is our powers. We had to find a way to cover everything up so that humans couldn’t see what was going on.”- There weren't any mistakes in this little section, but I had a story about guardian angels too and they always fought in the sky in flight, so it's really great. I really loved this. I can tell we can have common thought processes :)

“That, unfortunately, we’re not sure about. We’ve seen him do different things: spells, hypnotism, mind control, torture…any and everything, really,” Isabel said.- Hypnotism and mind control are essentially the same thing.

Everything was pretty good in this chapter :) Only a few things that need changing. You had some really great stuff in this chapter and I don't classify this as filler at all! Great job :)

I seriously love this story :) Still no mistakes, so my editing is zero and nonexistent. Great job!

Great job as always :) I'm not finding any mistakes, so that's a good sign :)

Crap! I totally got distracted and completely forgot to respond! I'm so sorry!!!

Great chapter by the way.

Also, don't spam this page.

Awesome chapter. I bet the creepy dude is the gaurdian angel.

hehe :D Great chapter! I found no mistakes :)