HOLY HOT CAR SEX BATMAN. Seriously, that entire chapter was just...perfect. Rory is totally falling for Matt's sweet personality, and Matt is doing the same with Rory's witty and sometimes abusive ways haha. I am completely in love with these characters, this story, this everything :3
Btw, nice song choice with "After The Last Midtown Show" :)
I wanted to leave a long and drawn out comment about all the feelings this chapter evoked in me but I'm running short on time. My apologies.
But in summation, I really enjoyed this chapter. How different Matt and Rory are is becoming quite clear. Yet they just seem to fit together. I was little disappointed that their first time happened in a car but it kind of suits them and their budding relationship.
I'm hoping that the Buffalo that Rory got in trouble with the law in was Buffalo, New York?! It's my favorite city! Oh and seriously Matt, who has never heard that song?!
I really hope that whatever these two are doing, they can find a way to make it last past the sumer, despite their differences and the differences in their life styles. I guess only time will tell.
Oh and the imagery! When you were describing the stars, I just wanted to see them so badly. Sounded absolutely beautiful. Does the sky really do that in Minnesota? If it does, I might just have to go on a vacation there sometime. Despite, what Rory thinks of it. ;)
Those kind of ideas were better left out under the stars.
That line, was kind of perfection. I love the way this story and their romance is blossoming. I love that she all these "things". Can I ask where you came up with that idea? I just think it's brilliant and adorable. Her family is very interesting as well. I forgot how old Terry is and I'm so curious as to what he looks like and how he knows italian operas? They are quite a cultured bunch, aren't they? And what is up with her scary, ex hockey player uncle? Anyway, I love your characters. They have depth and a background story that many fanfiction authors seem to leave out. Things that happened in the past that make them the way they are, without being stated out loud. I think this is really an amazing piece of work so far and I can't wait to read more!
Dear god can there be any more sexual tension between these two? I just want to take them both of them and push them together like ~NOW KISS~. Again haha. I really love how comfortable they seem to be with each other. Like it feels natural :) I can't wait for chapter four or part two of this chapter, because I have a feeling there are going to be so many shenanigans with this group :D
Oh gosh! Can you just imagine puking all over a cute boy and then going, 'Oh my God, I suck!' Too funny! You've got me cracking up! I really like your characters. I can't wait for more. :)
Oh Nisky :) I am so excited to read about him!! One of my favorite lines: "Like the size of his arms, and the sultry heat his eyes oozed when he was daydreaming." I giggled at this, and now that I am commenting on it I can't stop giggling! You sure do have a way with words :) I really love the humor and Rory's character is perfect! The ending was really sweet and that Animal song is beautiful!
I adre Matt Niskanen and I absolutely adore this story. It is so well written and very descriptive and you can actually imagine whatever thing looks like. You've written the characters so well and I love Matt and Rory's personalities. The feelings that you've written between them are undeniable and strong and now I'm babbling. Just continue on and update soon!
Oh my god. I love how Rory can go from annoying Matt, to lowering her defenses and telling him about her mom, to making out with him (aww yeah get some ;D), and then humiliating herself in front of him. Again. I can't even begin to imagine what is going to happen when she hangs out with him and his friends tomorrow haha :)
omg I love this so far! I feel so bad for Rory, I can't believe she just threw up all over him! I can't wait to see where this goes, I already love the start :]