I love this story, so much! I've been reading it since not long after it started, and it's great.
Also, I was reading the summary, and I noticed like one sentence in the Disclaimer part you may want to fix, because it was confusing.
It's be pretty sucky if you used to it, too, but I'm pretty sure that it's been used before. Mostly the first part, "It's be pretty sucky if you used to it, too," needs to be changed.
Chicken butt? Seriously? That's how you end it?! How cruel! T.T Update soon soon! I love your story soooo much! Can't wait to find out the baby's name. They're going to be such a cute family! Everyone that hates on her for being pregnant can go to Hell! Bastards *Glare*
I just started reading this yesterday and before I knew it I had finished every chapter! I love this crazy, adorable, sometimes sad, amazing story! Can't wait for more chapters, even though I don't want to see this come to an end! :)
Ahaha maybe he just really doesn't like Elizabeth, which is my name btw haha. and when you lose yourself as you're writing it must be because you are so into your character and that must just be how Asher is. Does any of that make sense?! Haha.
Comments=updates? Okay then. Well first of all, im in love with this story! Asher and Zara were addooorraabbllee together and when she found out that it was all a bet, it broke my little heart. :( I honestly hope that their baby brings them back together because im a sucker for romance <3
Sorry I've never commented before. I know how silent readers can be :) Cant wait for the next update!