alright so far but I find the way the five year old thinks, acts and talks completely unconvincing, not how one would behave at all.
August 20th, 2012 at 11:27pm
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I loved it.... but holy shit! I started it at work and didn't finish it until now!! lolAugust 2nd, 2012 at 05:21am
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I love them both.... RAWR!June 10th, 2012 at 02:40am
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This story is turning out to be quite lovely deary :D please do update!June 9th, 2012 at 08:23am
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SUBSCRIBED. love.April 30th, 2012 at 09:24am
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It's turning into such a great story! I stayed up all night reading it on my phone. Great job! Update soon(:March 30th, 2012 at 02:27am
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Now i still don't know who gave her the ring and killed her relatives! Plzz
Update wanna know!!February 26th, 2012 at 11:42pm -
Now i still don't know who gave her the ring and killed her relatives! Plzz
Update wanna know!!February 26th, 2012 at 11:42pm -
This is really interesting :) I really like it, and you're writing is good. If you want a tip, the only thing really, is your sentence structures. I struggle with this, too, in some scenarios.
Instead of "I watched and listened intently, curious of their conversation." you might want to say: Curious of their conversation, I watched and listened intently.February 23rd, 2012 at 05:54am -
WOW! I wanna know what happens!! Please add... :)
I definitely subscribe to this one!!February 6th, 2012 at 10:53am -
Girl, add more. Pleeeeaaseeee :)))
I'd REALLY appreciate it :)
SUBSCRIBE xDFebruary 6th, 2012 at 06:28am
