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  • imacrimiminal

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    i don't really understand why john beat him up and i have this nagging feeling that he should remember his family and at least make progress. :( sorry for the negativity it's just my opinion. anyway please update soon! and i'm dying to find out what happened to john what is his medication for?
    October 9th, 2012 at 01:54pm
  • bless

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    I am only on the second chapter of this story, but I am enjoying it so far. The layout is simple, and easy to read so kudos on that.
    Secondly, I liked the way your first chapter was short, but still very well written. You didn't give much insight to the characters, just the fact that they had a past together, even though miniscule it still exsisted.
    Currently I just finished the second chapter and I must admit I was a bit confused at first, but then everything started to pick up.
    No mistakes that I've picked up, nicely done.
    June 11th, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • JessLoui

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    I heart this story!!
    April 21st, 2012 at 02:33pm
  • rainbow33

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    I love this story, update soon!!!!
    April 18th, 2012 at 03:37pm
  • Pat Kirch.

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    HEY LYDIA WHAT UP
    April 17th, 2012 at 10:49pm
  • likewedid

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    perfect ok aHHHHHH <3_____<3
    April 17th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • Pat Kirch.

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    oh and i'll update this weekend :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:30pm
  • Pat Kirch.

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    but anyhow thank you so much for being so... nice about my story!

    hehe, and i promise you two things:

    - garrett goes back to school
    - thERE WILL BE DRAMA

    ahhhhh the chapter after next will be exciting i promise you that :D
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:30pm
  • Pat Kirch.

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    MICHAELA OH MY GOD HOW MANY COMMENTS DO YOU LEAVE

    ON EVERY CHAPTER

    I LOVE YOU
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    but i love this story SO MUCH
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:24pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    ANYHOW I'LL SHUT UP NOW
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:24pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    garrett's still definetly having to go back to school right?
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:24pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    the only thing is, i'd like a bit more drama/tension in the next chapter, or at least in the coming chapters
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    oh yeah, i just saw the characters section, and I think it's awesome how you've done that :3
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    update sooooon pleasepleaseplease??
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    sorry hehehehe i'm just SUPER OBSESSED with this story!
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    and the fact that he's doing this all JUST to make it up to garrett.. wow... this is beautiful
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:22pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    and john just UGH he just sounds ... like himself? idk he's such a sweetheart here, and the way he cares so much
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:22pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    this is so cute, i love it!
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:22pm
  • adamdamnlazzara

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    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:21pm
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