HOLY CRAP! I'm slighty confused to why John beat the shit out of Garrett, but I'm sure you'll explaint at later. This IS the most bizzare way of a couple getting together. I loved it though, very original!
jeez your writing is just fucking incredible. it's really like nothing else i have read. ahhh did i mention i LOVE this story damn i can't say it enough because this story is my favorite thing ever.
Poor Garret though! And John is a bit of an asshole I think, taking advantage of poor Garret like that...oh and just to let you know, I'm going to post continuous comments like this for a while, just on the off chance that I'm the most recent! :D
Seriously though, you have written this in such an imaginative, inventive way that makes it so emotional! It makes you really connect with the scene and get really drawn into whatever the hell you write! Thank you! :D