Omg!! I almost screamed when obese your update! ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆ I cant wait for mason to kidnap him! XD there better be some sexy ness soon! Or else..............I won't give you back your face. Thats right, I stole your face. XD
omg i was just thinking about this yesterday and im the new that so raven because you updated ^_^ i don't think ive commented before *tsk* and im not 100% sure why but you've got me swoooning over this sweets loves it
Oh, god please tell me that Asher and Mason don't get together. Cause I can tell that Asher might be getting a crush on him and THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! He belongs with Chase! Please tell me the MAIN love interest is Chase and that is who his boyfriend will be. Please
So... that was phenomenal haha. Priceless that last line, absolutely priceless. hahaha. So um... Chase huh? interesting guy there... hahaha. I can't even right now, it's too good. Can't wait for more ^.^ Also, Mason is completely my favourite character right now. He's just so mysterious. I love it :D
Alright, so I can't really recall how I stumbled across this story in the land of new mibba, but I am so fucking glad I did. Honestly though, I haven't fond a gay fiction worth reading in forever, and I just sat down and read this in one go. As a fellow author, let me just say that this story is incredible. Please, please, please update soon. Your characters are so vibrant, it's insane!
I'm Team Chase because I find him all cute and adorable and confused and awww :3 xD I love him The chapter with the kissing and the sleeping and the hickeyness providing... *SQUEALS* Hhahahaha Thank you! I loved it! Especially how Chase was like "I SUCK FACE -le die" lol I really love this story I haven't gotten this into one in a while and I've missed reading things on here You're doing a great job with this and I can't wait to see where it goes next I have a feeling you've got a load more twists and turns coming up to (sneakyness) Anyway, I'm all up to date now and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Ash's comment about redecorating made me laugh too xD I've realised now that this story will probably make me smile every time I read it haha I love all the characters already and I have a massive soft spot for Chase :) He's so sweet even though he can be really horrible xD I'm looking forward to drunk Chase, yes :) I'm on chapter 8 now I was planning to do one comment at the end, but I keep getting scared that I'll forget something so I'll probably just throw in a comment every now and then as i read through lol Hopefully this isn't annoying! :P ...you'll grow to love me xD
Another thing just happened and I feel the need to comment now before I forget lol "Mason and Chase would be somewhere down at the bottom near Ghandi and Darth Vader" I'm in stitches XD Seriously... Oh dear! And I did not expect that twist either. I thought because they were rival schools they knew each other from soccer games or something, and I assumed that Chase knew Mason was gay because like everyone did, so that's why he hated him But NO! THEY KISSED?! Hehehehe Chase kissed a boy ;P I shall go back to reading again now... I'm not sure how many chapters I have left I'm scared that it's nearly over! :'( Anyway, read! :D
I'm at the start of chapter 6 right now, but there's something I need to tell you RIGHT NOW before I finish reading the whole thing xD At the start of the chapter I was like "What the hell is going? What could this ugly thing be?!" XD I was getting well into it, practically talking to the computer screen lol Then when you mentioned Mason's lap I was like OH NO! Really!?! That's so dirty xD But in the back of my mind, I was like 'It can't be that... can it?' lol And then the “See! Look, Albert loves you!” line came and I burst out laughing haha You got me! :P I'm guessing that's what you wanted me to be thinking when you wrote it, so I thought I'd tell you that it worked :) And well done! I'm loving the story btw, I shall now go back to reading it :))
I'm so sorry that I haven't commented on this for a while, I've been caught up with things, y'know ^^ But yeah, as usual this is a perfect story, absolutely and utterly perfect. Asher is my favourite character by far. But Mason's cool too....I'm inclined today i might be slowly leaning towards Team Mason, maybe. He's just simply lovely. I like the last part at the end of the last chapter: "Oh, and you might want to cover up the hickey the size of Texas on your neck," Basically every single one of your characters is amazing. And I want more, convince me into leaning back towards team chase? Maybe? UPDATE SOON ANYWAY :) xx
This is the best thing I've read in a very long time! I absolutely adore Asher, he's just perfect. I've been constantly laughing(like, throwing my head back and laughing not so quietly) because of him. Sigh <3 And that was very mean, what you did there. In the last chapter I mean. Talk about leaving us hanging! Update soon.
HOLY BEJEEBUS. This story is heaven. I love Asher so much, and the plot and writing are just both damn amazing. I need more of this precious story- AH-MAZING! ^_^
I love this story! It's awesome. I can't decide who I like better, but I think it's Mason. Of course I like Chase too. I like Asher. He's my favorite so we'll go with that. xD
jhawkerhsajk jeeze that sounds like me on a rambling spree with a crush. as for a story for you to read, I just finished a slash and starting the sequel. it'll be the first story on my list for stories. it's a lying game kinda thing