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no no no go back and kiss Mason !!

STOP APOLOGIZING AND START WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER
<3

I've been reading this for awhile now, and I'm so excited it was the featured story!

This story is incredible and I really hope things work out for the best! I noticed this story on the homepage and decided to give it a shot, I'm so glad I did!

So, I saw this on the front page of Mibba and I'm a big fan of slash so I was like "Okay, this sound really good." Well, I did not know just how AMAZING it was going to be. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to see the rest of their journey together. :)

I really like what you have goin here. So update soon, yes?

My goodness, I just started reading this, and I love it! :D Please, update soon!! <3

Team Chase all the way. Just found this story as mibba's story of the week and I have to say I'm impressed and I think that this story should definitely have more than ten chapters. It's written greatly and I want you to update soon. You've got a great story on your hands.

Chase. Definitely Chase. Sorry, Mason.

When are you going to update?! I'm going insane here!!!!

UPDATTTEEEE!!!!! I am dying here! This story is so wonderful! Please update soon!

I really like this story. I want more, please. Let's see if you can get an update within December. Ha. But seriously, this story is addicting. I wonder if Chase only went out with Ashley so he could call her "Ash"? And this story better be longer than another ten chapters. I disagree with the a/n. >:o

i just read the whole thing and holy i am in love but you need to update! I love this story soo much and i am already missing not knowing what is going to happen yet! I mean i feel like obviously he is going to end up with Chase, but i think it would be funny that the whole time Mason had a boyfriend that was just gone somewhere and he just needed someone to entertain him hahah :P

yes! is it weird that i want ash to be with mason? they just seem good together, anywhooooo, i love this story, its my first comment tho, i just had to, cuz it just gets better and better <3

*hits head on desk*
I read some comments and now I know what happens
Silly me xD
Oh well, I'm gonna read it now anyways haha

DUDE DUDE DUDE :'D
OMG

This story is just so perfect and grr
I hate me xD

I'm really sorry for disappearing and I don't really know if I'm back, but I needed to read this still!
I've been coming online at times but haven't had chance to read, so obviously when i got chance it had to be this one!
To be honest, I sorta do need sleep and to revise for tomorrow and do my english homework, but I wanted this SO I'M READING IT
YES XD

My plan (cz it's too late for my brain to use a computer and then sleep) was to have a bath and read this on my iPod, then sleep.
But on my iPod the wifi's rubbish and grrr
So after 2 chapters I was like WHO NEEDS SLEEPS AND REVISION
I'M SUPERMAN
So yeah!
I couldn't not get on the computer to read properly and comment and tell you i love you and this story too much haha

I'm not sure if I'll make sense (as always) because I'm rushing and fan girling and tired
BUT I'LL DO MA BEST

Chappy 14

I read "the words "best friends" had been redefined" and was just like CHIODOS XD
Don't know if that was done on purpose or not, but it made me smile haha Like I do a lot reading this

It was so easy for me to get back into this by the way. I just remembered it all. Except for some of the girl characters (im sexist against my own sex) but when i reread over christmas (i must) I'll be back into that part of it too

ANYWAY

I love how jealous Ash is in this! OMG I'M ASH
sorry lol
Yeah.
Back to what I was saying
He's clearly jealous but he doesn't want to be and naww babes!
And I got a load more Mason love in this one.
He's an amazing friend. I want to be like 'Mase is the perfect best friend' but I don't want to offend Chase cz he might hit me or something xD

When he mentioned Bertie being sat with him I was like 'Bertie's? :s' and then it hit me and I was like OMG THE PENIS JOKE BERTIE XD
I'll never forget the scene where we were introduced to that little monster

'he's usually all over your ass like white on rice' MORE MASON LOVE FROM THIS HAHAHA
I'm so gonna use that phrase from now on
I'm all over this story like white on rice ya know?
...it's cooler when Mason says it

OH I love how you do speech by the way. You put in the false starts and fillers and make them seem awkward and uncomfortable in the right situations. That is something I love

And jokey flirty Mason is awesome and funny and nawwwwww
I'm Team Chase but Mason is literally someone I'd love as a friend

Ash's mum XD
Finding the person in your trying to avoid in your room would be very awkward... BUT I LOVE IT XD
I'm glad it wasn't all like 'IT'S OKAY I LOVE YOU! LET'S JUST MAKE UP' cz we need Ash to stand up for himself and give Chase something to think about.
Chase needs to realise how much he misses Ash and how epic he is and aww

"Ash, Christ, I'm just, I don't even know anymore, I just..." THINK I LOVE YOU? That's obviously what he wanted to say. RIGHT?!

CHAPPY 15
I've missed this :'(

The quiet girl telling Ash what bit their reading? Yeah, that's me. lol I'm always that person. I pay attention too much at times...

I like River's character and hate him at the same time xD I can't remember what he's done tho (another thing i need to reread for) but i remember Ash punching him I think and he's obviously on about something....but what

And everyone was scaring me by talking to him loads. I thought Chase had said something about them and that's why everyone wanted to talk to him and oh god it was a scary moment.
I'm not ready for that yet.
BREATHE

Is Chloe stalkery crazy girl? lol I have a feeling she is but i'm not certain
I have weird ways of remembering characters

And more funny loveable Mason moments :3

SIXTEEN
LOOK AT THE SIZE OF THIS BAD BOY XD

I want Ash's mum
I love how her character is so consistent and always wants to spend time with him, but in a cute way instead of an annoying way
She's too cool
And she's protective and loves Chase and lol
Silly woman ;)

For me, Mason has always been second best for me cz i just love Chase
IS THERE SOMETHING WRONG WITH ME
Hahaha
But this moment was like one of my fav things with Mason
the 'Mason seemed delighted by the confrontation as a grin immediately curved on his face' line LOL
I read that in a really weird voice, I can't even describe it but it arghhhhh It's perfect
I love how Mason's just like YES! I CAN ANNOY CHASE WITHOUT IT BEING MY FAULT!
Oh and the line earlier when he says something like 'so i shouldnt kiss him again then' or something XD
Love him in this

And the pet names and more laughter and then Ash stepping up and being like 'FINE! I'll sort this'
I could just tell something had to happen and YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
...IT DID

people keep walking in and interrupting me at the best moment.
it would happen now of all times

Chase didn't resist because he totally wanted you do that Ash
he wanted you alone ;)

He sat in front of him
SO CLOSE
And it's dark and romantic and their both angry and omg the passion

I think Chase is extremely jealous of Mason's gayness

“Well I fucking miss you, okay!?”
YES IT'S OKAY THAT YOU MISS HIM CHASEY
We understand
This is what we wanted hun
Don't worry
It's normal to miss the love of your life
Now stop being an asshole and hold him or something
And kiss
And say you love him
And don't pretend you don't remember later
You totally do remember
You have a photographic memory and relive you Ash times whenever you're alone...in bed
YEAH
I can read you like a book Mr Chase
YOU ARE A BOOK

yes.

silence flooded between us SILENCE
BETWEEN THEM
THE TENSION OMG
AND CHASE'S FACE
AND CLOSENESS

And i've already read it so i know what happens but my fingers aren't ready to explode yet but OH GOD
AQSWDEGTFRHYJUHEDX
CANT HOLD IT
ASDFGHGFDC
DFGHN

"letting me eat the mushrooms off your pizza" Obviously the most important part of their friendship XD

AND KISS
And the forehead touch moment
Dunno why but i love that
cute moment
AND THEN WOW
They're too perfect and totally in love and nawwww

You wrote that so well girl and it was cute and didn't feel rushed and amazing :))

DUN DUN DUN
WHO THE HELL IS INTERRUPTING SEXY TIME

Chase would be funny. OMG RIVER lol
If he walked in on them two like that i'd just die laughing

YOURE AWESOME AND THAT WAS AWESOME AND MORE
Wait, there is more! :D XD

i need to go though
*cries*

i'm gonna read the rest in bed and probably not sleep cz i'll be too hyper and then when i do sleep ill dream of chase and ash cuteness, or should i say chash cuteness? Ay? I like that xD
And then the alarm clock will go off and I shall cry
and have a chemistry test :(

OH WELL

I'll probably be able to finish this comment thing off tomorrow night :D

But this is really amazing and I've missed reading about my babies and I feel bad for leaving them and this and *sniffle*

Too epic man

Oh my god!! I just started reading this story like...yesterday. and girl this story is so freaking amazing!! You are amazing. Everything about it is perfect. I mean each and every character is perfect. And I laugh so hard at so much of the things that Ash says and Mason and Layla and gosh this is just so good. And please I need another update. NEED. It is so good. I love love love this story. Amazing! You are just spectacular!!! Update as soon as possible please!! Love you and the story once again!! :)

So excited!! more soon, great updates!!!

I'm excited to see what happens with Mason. I freakin love this story! I'm not sure what I'm going to do when it's done.

So, I'm a huge fan of original slash and I find that it's really hard to find one with a good story line and that is written well. This though, is a gem. I read the whole thing in the space of about a week and I can't wait to read more. The character's are so well done, they have personality and it's hard not to get attached to them. You're a really talented writer. I'm going to be sad when this story ends but I can't wait to see how things go for these boys.