Waters of Disillusion - Comments

"Oh yeah? Mud pies. Dirt. Manure. Worms."
Idk why I found that so funny.

UPDATE SOOON! :)

Love.

ho ho ho ho ho hohooooo
he's so jelly omfg! It's almost cute, almost but not quite.
Nicolette Leigh still sounds so melodic! sigh, I just love her name.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen when he realizes that he needs to give up that Mae girl if he wants any hope of getting with Leigh romantically :3

Loved the update!
Oh Tyler. :/ Hm... so he's a little bit jealous. But he's been pulling Nicolette along so he kind of deserves the same treatment a little, does he not? That way he knows how it feels. :/
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Just like trubeverage said one page 1, I haven't found a story I've liked in so long. I just love this, I love the name Nicollete Leigh and it does sound so well together and I just love the accents, it sounds so southern in my head but I could never actually do it. Haha anyways I think Tyler's an idiot but he really does love her. I'm curious to see how Benji and Tyler will clash.

Hell, I love this story.

I love the color of the culture, I love the characters, I love the easy-going and steady flow of chapters that all make sense despite being short.

Update soon, please. (:

Oh how I love thee, let me count the ways.

This story is amazing. I love the characters, I love the authenticity. I love it all. Great amazing dearly good job. :D :D :D :D :D

Dawwwwwwww he's all protective and shizz, even when he's drunk <3

wow. i haven't found a story on here is so long that i enjoy as much as this.
i love your characters, and the accents, i totally talk in the southern twang when reading in my head.

Loved the update! :D
'And if there's anything I hate, it tourists.'
Should it be 'it's' tourists? Maybe not. Idk if you did that on purpose to go with her accent or something, or if that was a mistake. XD So that may or may not be a correction. :P
Great job with the update! :D I logged on just to read it. I haven't had much time on here lately, sorry for the delay in commenting. :/
But I can't wait for more! And hopefully I get to reading and commenting the new update of your other story soon too! I saw you updated SIL. :)

Yaaaaaaaaay :)

Uh, I love this story. I just caught up, and I'm loving it.

Keep up the good work. (:

lol. I find lava lamps very entertaining to watch. And you're so lucky! I haven't had one since I was like, ten. XD And that was like, a mini one. I haven't seen a bigger one since... before then. XD
It's been a long time, though, since I've known someone who's had one. :/
Anyway, great job with the update! :D Ooh... aha, Tyler doesn't like the new guy, which I kind of expected. :P He doesn't like competition. :P
And aw, Benjamin wants to be her boyfriend! That's cute. :D
Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D

Damn, Mibba hasn't notified me your updates for the past three chapters :/

Anyways, daaaaamn. I still ship Tyler and Nicolette Leigh. But Benjamin is kinda hot, ngl.

Update soon!

I thought a granddaughter was going to be the new character? Or is there just a grandson as well? Because you said granddaughter in the last chapter, so...
idk. I'm probably just confusing myself. XD
And I just reread the ending of the last chapter, so never mind. I'm guess I'm just confused about the granddaughter thing, since it was mentioned.
Anyway, though, great job with the update! :) Ooh... it looks like Tyler may have a little bit of competition now. ;) How will he react to the new guy?
Can't wait for more! :D

Loved the update! :D
Aha, hm, so, I wonder what the girl will be like. Usually people end up different than you assume them to be...
And aha, Ruby. So subjected to the people around her. Poor kid. XD
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Oh, friends with benefits. Sounds a lot less complicated than an actual relationship.

(: Loved it.

Loved the update! :D Great job with it! Oh, and sorry for the delay in commenting. :O
Aw, Nicolette and Tyler are so cute together. Amanda Mae just needs to get out. XD Because she's preventing them from happening! :(
One thing I wanted to note:
'I swear, her perfect ski slope knows turns up in the air even more.'
I'm thinking 'knows' should be 'nose'. XD If not, the line doesn't really make sense.
But otherwise, great job with the update, like I said before! Can't wait for more! :D

Nicolette is such a pretty name. I've been saying it over and over lol. It's nice!
I like how they're best friends. It's cute.
I hope there's something moooooooooore ;)
Update! :)

i love this story