Waters of Disillusion - Comments

You're awesome. And so is this.

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Loved the update! :D
Aww... this one was cute. :) Very cute. I liked it. :)
Nicolette's refusing to accept to love him now, but will that last...? ;D
He's a dare-devil, I like it. :D And she does too. :P
Great update! Can't wait for the next one! :D

Loved the new chapter! Sorry for the delay in commenting. :o
But great job with it. You have the southern accent seriously down pat; I believed every word you made the characters speak. :)
And the person before me already pointed this out, but oh well. I love this line too:
'To this day, he swears it was love at first shiner.'
That was like, the best of all of the lines in the update. :)
Really, really love this! Can't wait for more! :D

<3

I love this.

"Love at first shiner."

Update soon!

Loved the first update! :D
Just one thing to note for the first point, you put: 'Being cursed with the x chromosome.' But everyone has an x chromosone, guy or girl. lol. So maybe you should put 'Being cursed with two x chromosomes', to make your point bolder, you know? Or maybe even use 'Not having a y chromosome', for another way of wording it. Like, we all understood what you meant, but... just saying about an X chromosome in general could really mean anyone, technically speaking.
I'm sorry. I'm getting pretty technical. You don't have to change it if you don't want to, but yeah. Aha.
Anyway, great start to the story, though. I like how you started it, really. :) And I like how, all of the points initially deal with something wrong with the town. Aha. Even though the main character was trying to make worse points. You really have me wondering what's going to happen next, especially with that last point. ;)
Can't wait for more! :D



Oh, and I looovee you too!! :D Aha.

I died from laughter. Great stuff.

I really enjoyed this. Update soon, dear.

Ahaha, well, even if you choose to change it, I love the banner for this. Aha. The person with the cathead. XD
But anyway, you said to check this out sooo... I am. :D Aha. Can't wait for this to start!
Definitely... subscribed! :D