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  • temptation;

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    Team Jordan. Team Jordan. Team Jordan lol
    I just don't think Ellie deserves Kris at all and her and Jordan have a huge past that he can't compete with.
    February 28th, 2012 at 01:02am
  • bublbabie

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    Man that is a hard question. Kris of Jordan.I think I have to go with Kris because he really loves her and i think she is on the way to maybe love with him. Jordan has a girlfriend who he hasn't broken up with even though he has feelings for Ellie and not for said girlfriend. He just doesn't seem right for her in my opinion. So, my vote is for her to choose Kris and realize that Jordan has no intention of breaking up with the girlfriend.
    February 28th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • therealdeal

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    TEAM KRIS. Forever Team Kris. Just because Kris is so darn nice to her and just a complete gentleman. I love the update! I can't wait for more! :)
    February 28th, 2012 at 12:55am
  • dallasstar28

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    Team Kris. Jordan always gets his happy ending. You have Jordan stories already! Pleease Kris all the way! I'll give you a cyber cookie! :D
    February 27th, 2012 at 05:10am
  • raggedyann87

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    Team Kris. I feel like bringing Avery in could get too confusing.
    February 26th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • abber73

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    Team kris, jordan has his chance and screwed the pooch, for once let's have the nice guy finish first. I think avery should help kris to win her over
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:05pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Sean Avery just creeps me out, he's a tool and I really hope he's not in the story anymore! If a Ranger has to be in it, pick Del Zotto or Boyle or Dubinsky or someone, just not Avery! haha.
    Anyways, Kris is so sweet to her and I think she should end up with him. BUT I'm keeping an open mind and it's up to you to sell Jordan to me! :D
    February 24th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • pesky-canes

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    I'm so glad you did a sequel!!! I'm liking Sean in it, but I have to go with Team Jordan all the way even though Kris is amazing!
    February 21st, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • xoxabs88xox

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    Yesssss!!!!

    I still say she should decide with a threesome ;)
    February 21st, 2012 at 04:21am
  • dreamerforever

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    1. Sean Avery always means trouble to me.
    2. Team Kris all the way.
    February 20th, 2012 at 02:58am
  • FootieGirl85

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    Can't remember if I already commented on this, but if not, this is great! I'm really excited to see where this goes, and I love that the nice guy Kris is getting a shot (even if I have the feeling it wont make it in the end!)
    February 20th, 2012 at 01:27am
  • wickedangel21

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    so far girlie i love it.......keep writing cause im hooked on your writing. :D
    February 20th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • kittenzurfav

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    I freaking loved it! I would love sean to stir up some drama. I wish her and Kris could be together, but I feel like Kris doesn't deserve her! So my vote is for jordan, even though he has been a total ass. Can't wait for another update!
    February 19th, 2012 at 09:48am
  • tayls52

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    Yessssss!
    This wasn't oring at all . no wories :P
    I dont think Sean will cause trouble cause they'll be back in the 'Burgh sooo...
    Alsooo I think her and Tanger should be together for a while but then she'll be like WTF am I doing and and up with Jordan and like... tanger'll end up with Trish? Idk :P
    February 18th, 2012 at 04:25am
  • MariannaMata

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    I want Jordan and her for-freaking- ever. But! I would like some Tanger-ness in this. He's just GAH! Too hot...
    February 17th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • pitts87pens

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    Avery is def. trouble...So glad you decided to make this story longer...but i do have to say i like her with Kris...but I like her with Jordan as well..Cant wait for more!
    February 17th, 2012 at 05:12am
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    I am so happy that you updated this story. First of all, I think Sean should just be a friend because he seems to be someone who doesn't really remind her of Jordan. I also think that having to choose between Kris and Jordan is really hard. She loves Jordan so much and you can see it through her actions and her inability to really deny him of anything. However, I love Kris in this story. He is so incredible to her and treats her so well, even when she was sleeping with Jordan. I can also see how happy he makes her, and how much support he gives her.... but she loves Jordan so much! It is such a hard decision. I think you should update more so I can form a good opinion on the matter. =D
    February 17th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • Colby_Armstrong9

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    Kris seems too perfect. Nope, I just cannot see them together. Jordan doesn't deserve Ellie and I hate to say it but Ellie doesn't deserve Kris. I don't think what she's doing to Kris is fair either way. Yes she is trying to make it right by staying with Kris and only Kris, but I feel like its also unfair to be with him when you are in love with another man. It's kind of like you said in your Deryk story, it shouldn't be hard to stay with Kris and I think she's just using Kris for an alternative for Jordan. So if you coukdn't guess I think Jordan needs to get his shit together and become the man Ellie needs and Kris needs a perfect woman like he deserves. Awesome story by the way! We are off to a great start!
    February 17th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • Bismuth

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    Kris all the way:) but I certainly wouldn't complain about a couple steamy Jordan-Ellie scenes though...
    February 17th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • therealdeal

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    I'm all for Team Kris! As for Avery, I actually want to see him back in some chapters causing a stir between either Ellie and Jordan or Ellie and Kris. There's has to be someone to bring more drama into there lives! I'm loving this so far, can't wait for more :)
    February 17th, 2012 at 01:26am