Deserving Ellie - Comments

UGHH NO TEAM JORDAN. clearly im just biased ;) loved this though

loved it. the ending really wrapped it all up. Brilliant. xoxo

I finally caught up with this! I kinda kept going back and forth with who I wanted her to end up with. I guess I felt bad about her "choosing" Jordan and then leaving him right after they slept together. I think it's time for Jordan to be happy though! Great story! :)

I just think Jordan should move on. Find a nice girl in Carolina. He will never deserve Ellie. I hope in the sequel though Kris and Ellie get married that would be awesome

Amazing ending. Amazing!

I really liked the ending! I love how you ended it with Jordan thinking of Carolina. you should totally make a sequel to this because that ending wasn't enough haha.

You did an amazing job with this story even though I wanted her to end up with Jordan. I really hope you do write a sequel! :)

this was so amazing!!! thank you!!!

I would love to see a sequel :)

I loved this whole story even if it didn't end the way I wanted it to =P I hope there's a sequel!! :)

i hate how she was leading kris on !

HOLY SMOKELEYOLI!!! [<--- Don't ask, I'm running on 3 hours of sleep in the last 3 days.] I've been seriously lacking on comments. But I did read every single chapter, in between summer classes, homework, projects, starting fall classes, and everything else that has been thrown my way.

This didn't end the way I expected it too. Wait a sec, I don't even know how I expected it to end. I said in the very beginning, probably in the prequel that I was rooting for Kris to win in my heart, but thinking that Jordan was going to win. I'm so glad that Kris win. I really wanted him too.

Not sure I completely understand the whole bracelett/cuffs thing. I get their relationship, but I don't know if I missed something somewwhere, somehow or what. Maybe I'm just more tired than I thought to get that part.

I don't know what to say really. Your stories are so fucking amazing!!! They're absolutely perfect! They're not predictable at all and I love that. I love that I am continuosly suprised and sometimes even torn, between each and every chapter.

As always, I would love to see a sequel. Maybe nothing really to do with Ellie. Maybe Jordan and his discision to reject the Pens proposal and accept the trade to Carolina, to maybe move on from Ellie and then find happiness in the end or something. Maybe keep their friendship at a bare minimum. But if not, that's okay too, since I kinda thought this was a perfect ending for Kris and Ellie.

I can't wait to see what you throw at me next. Even if I don't love the player *coughsidcough* you'll be writing about, I'll still read it.

Okay wow. Where to start? Obviously I read this about two hours after it was posted but after reading it I had to digest a little before I could comment. First of all I'm a Canes fan and I LOVE Brandon Sutter so the trade bit at the end stung a little (I'm sure for you too, we'll take good care of Jordan, even if I am a little mad at him. I know it's not his fault deep down...). I truly hope that the ending is not hinting at a sequel, I love your stories but I don't know if I can read that one. I think it was meant to be for Ellie to be with Kris. Other than that, I'll probably read every word you ever post! What a great, gut-wrenching story this was. And of course it was HOT. I'm a little tamer than these two, which is why I think the ending threw me, but who says love has to be a certain way? It's definitely different for everyone and I applaud you for having the courage to write something a bit different than the stuff I normally read here. You have a gift for making the reader empathize with each character (even Jordan, even when I didn't want to). I'm not as big of a Sid fan as I am a Kris fan but I'm looking forward to the next story. James Neal on the other hand, can't WAIT to see that.

Great ending Pheebs! Sexy, romantic, hot, SEXY!!! :D Gotta love Tanger! Although I thought there would be more of Jordan, you know, moving on with someone else, but hey, what a great reason for a sequel! (: Can't wait for the new stories to start. Sad to see this one end, but I know it only means a new beginning for a new story, so I'm not complaining. I have yet to be disappointed in ANY of your stories. Every single one I have read (and I've read them all - at least once, some twice) is so well written and just keeps you on the edge, wanting to know what happens next. As I've commented before, with some of them, one in particular, I was glad they were already finished when I read them because I wouldn't have been able to stand it if I thought they ended the way they seemed they were going to! You definitely ROCK Phoebe. I am in awe of your amazing talent and ability to write an awesome story, from the very first word until the very last one. I totally love you....in a totally non-creepy way! :) Thanks for the hours of complete entertainment you have provided me with through your stories! Keep up the great work girl.

dfdhsjgskj don't bring up the trade! :P That was such a good ending though honestly... I didn't really understand the bracelets but I think I kinda got it...?
I would love to see a sequel :)

Love it!!! They are so good together. Of course I was always team Kris so I'm happy they ended up together. Looking forward to the Sid and Neal stories. You are a great writer so I know they will be good. Thanks for all the time and
work you do for us!

I would love to read a sequel. I loved this story just as much as some of your other stories. I like Kris and Ellie together (as you may have guessed from previous comments!) I'm a little sad to see it end, though. I'll be watching for your new storylines. Love your writing style!

Yayayay!! I'm so happy they are together and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

SEQUEL!!! However, I'd like to see Jordan find a new girl! :) Perhaps someone Ellie might know to give it a tie or something.

Sequel please! I loved this story!