Deserving Ellie - Comments

  • punkrockromance

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    Okay too many emotions to properly comment the last two chapters so let me try again. First of all, it's amazing that Ellie figured out she loved Kris. I've been reading back and I'm pretty amazed that you didn't know how it was going to end because there were so many clues hinting toward Kris. I think Ellie can deal with him sleeping around a little to deal with the pain, after all, if she doesn't tell him how she feels, what is he really doing wrong? I just hope it doesn't take too long, I definitely hope he doesn't meet someone else he starts getting serious about. And THANK YOU for not making Ellie the girl that thinks the cheater will change! Maybe he would or could have, but it just seemed like Jordan didn't ultimately care about anyone but himself. I know Ellie isn't going to get Kris back easily and I hope she will approach him again and stop being stubborn because she was right, Kris has always been the one giving.
    August 9th, 2012 at 05:46pm
  • Cali's Mommy

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    I'm still reading.....and commenting, even though I wrote an AMAZING comment on the last chapter and it wouldn't post! :( So, on the last chapter I was screaming inside "YESSSS" as soon as I read the very first line. I KNEW she loved Kris and would figure it out! :0) Hopefully he will forgive her for the thing with Jordan, after all, he did walk away because he thought she loved Jordan. I think he will forgive her....IF he ever talks to her (I know he will though). I knew as I was reading that the bimbo would throw away her note.....it always happens like that. Actually, Jordan needs to man up, even though he loves her too, and tell Kris what's going on, because he should want his best friend (Ellie) to be happy, even if it is with Kris. So yes, still team KRIS all the way! And I'm all for the faster updates.....yay!
    August 9th, 2012 at 05:25pm
  • Emily Lane

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    I can't see Kris doing anything more with the one-night-bimbo, she's history already. I think he might start making this a habit though, bringing home random girls to try and forget Ellie /: In the end, I think Jordan is going to be the one who pulls Kris' head out of his ass and make him realize how much he has been hurting Ellie
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:52pm
  • punkrockromance

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    Ugh I want to smack that blond bitch!!!
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:37pm
  • missann10

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    Ah that girl needs to back off and I hope Kris and Ellie talk soon!!! Love the update :) can't wait for the next one!!
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • xoxabs88xox

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    no no no no no!

    (sorry. knee jerk reaction.)
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:06pm
  • midniteangel1802

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    great writting even if ellie is picking the wrong guy
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:00pm
  • Bugalouie

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    Omfg don't do this to my heart.
    August 9th, 2012 at 03:49pm
  • bublbabie

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    did she really think that girl wouldn't throw the note away? I knew she would. She just needs to go talk to him
    August 9th, 2012 at 02:48pm
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • RocknRollBlondii

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    YAYAYAYAY!!! What the hell is she doing sitting on Jordan's couch?? She needs to put on her big girl panties and go find Kris.!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Hurry!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:09pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I wasn't expecting this. I totally wasn't. I'm happy for her either way, though.
    August 8th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • pesky-canes

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    whoah this was amazing! I have to admit I was pretty mad she's picking Kris but I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 07:28am
  • wintersgirl1608

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    Love that Ellie finally figured it out. Now if only Kris will take her back..I'm hoping that he does, but I'm also getting the feeling that it won't be easy for anyone involved.
    Can't wait for more!
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • Emily Lane

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    I really don't have the words to express how happy I am that she finally realized that Kris is who she should be with!
    August 8th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • Vielendank

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    Ellie finally grew up! Yay!! Jordan's seeming a little more mature, too. I hope Ellie and Kris can talk about things and see this as a new start of sorts. He obviously knew she had to deal with her feelings for Jordan whatever they were and she's done that. I'm sure Kris won't be thrilled that she slept with him, but it's something he could understand under the circumstances.
    August 8th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • JDStanley

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    Ok so this chapter made up for the last one. I'm glad that Ellie realized that she made a mistake and that she really is in love with Kris. I have a feeling Kris will more than willingly take her back, but I'm not sure how he'll feel about her sleeping with Jordan. But maybe just maybe Kris will realize this is what Ellie had to do to realize who she wanted.

    But in all honest truth I said it last chapter and even Ellie said it at the end of this chapter, honestly does she deserve either of them? Who knows!!!!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • ktizzle1010

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    Yaaaay! Kris soooo deserves to get the girl
    August 8th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • dallasstar28

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    OH YEAH! team Kris
    August 7th, 2012 at 11:35pm
  • missann10

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    Not mad at all, love that she is choosing Kris! I'm glad Jordan forgave her and still wants to be friends, now I hope Kris forgives her and gives her another chance!!
    August 7th, 2012 at 02:56pm